Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: amk16 Anonymous Date: 10/11/05 - 11:05PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

she pulled out the L word in that one. I don't know what to say. I know that he's trying to protect her, but if she finds out about the pictures through some unfriendly source, things won't be so harmonious. Speaking of protection, those two are getting increasingly close. I just hope that no rash decisions are made, and that Justin can think correctly should Elli try to show how much she loves him in more physical terms. I love them together, but it'd only cause more trouble, especially if a cop already knows about them.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Elli and Justin both reallize the consequences of starting a physical relationship and will take that into consideration....that is unless they get caught up in the passion of moment. Hmm...this could get complicated. :)


Reviewer: stimble Signed Date: 10/11/05 - 01:45AM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

oh my god....are the gonna *whispers* do it? j/k so now the REAL drama begins...what i've been waiting for.....yay! good job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review and I'm so sorry it took me so long to respond.


Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 09:02PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

DON'T JUST LEAVE IT AT THat????? You are like the queen of cliffhangers. Love this chapter it's super cute!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: "The Queen of Cliffhanger." Hmm....I like that. :) LOL! Glad you loved the chapter, reading that made me smile. Thanks so much for reviewing.


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 08:22PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

OMG are they gonna make love?! YESSS! And OMG nooooooo, i don't want them to get in trouble. i want them to be together! update soon!

Author's Response: LOL! Quite the mix of emotions isn't it? Mwahahaha! I love it! Thanks a bunch for reviewing.


Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 07:47PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

Shit man that was an awesome chapter. One of the best yet. I can't believe it. Everyone is gonna know and I think she wants to have sex but I don't think Justin will. Why couldn't she just be 18. But everyone is doing in now a days. Lindsey and Wilmer, Hilary Duff adn Jole Madden, its can't be that big a problem.

Author's Response: Awe, thank you. You are just too nice. It may not be a big deal with celebrities but Elli's personal life would take big blow. She would no longer be just an "average" citizen plus all the drama with her mother. Hopefully that made sense to you. :) Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 07:16PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

They should move here to Brazil, so she'd be legal here. LOL Love thi story and I missed it. :D

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 03:48PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

I second what Hollie said. Although, if they were in Chicago, Elli wouldn't be considered a minor. *lol* Wait, what am I saying?!?!?! I do not...I repeat, DO NOT...condone Justin and Elli having "relations". I may be alone on this one, but somebody has to be the voice of reason (or is it insanity?). I say no sex in the champagne room, and the champagne room is Elli's body...therefore they can't have sex. Can't they wait a few more months? *gets on knees and grovels* PLEASE?!?!?! I'm only thinking about Elli, I am in no way trying to harm or tease or torture Justin...I'd save that for real life. *lol*

Author's Response: "Although, if they were in Chicago, Elli wouldn't be considered a minor. *lol* Wait, what am I saying?!?!?! I do not...I repeat, DO NOT...condone Justin and Elli having "relations". "--LOL You're too funny. :) I know that you don't want anything physical to happen between Justin and Elli. You have made that quite clear. You'll just have to wait and see what happens. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nikki g. Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 02:44PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

I feel the exact same way and when you said that the shnit hit the fan, oh did it. love it so please update soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time review. Thanks and I hope to hear from you regarding the next chapter.


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 02:55AM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

WHY do I feel like sex with a minor is getting increasingly likely?? Deary me, what a tangled web we weave. More soon, my dear!

Author's Response: LOL! More is coming. Thanks for reviewing!





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