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Reviewer: Krissy
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/05 - 02:29AM
Title: A Sudden Exit
What I wouldn't give to be in Cat's shoes, being all happy after some Timberlove. I'm surprised Cat didn't freak out seeing that newspaper, that's a big improvement for her. And again I have to tell you how funny the whole breakfast scene was, I'm sitting here laughing to myself. I fell sorry for Cat about the whole family thing, i wonder how all that will work out, with her being with them and Justin in New York. Excellent chapter, so go to that computer and start the next chaper so you can update soon.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/05 - 08:17PM
Title: A Sudden Exit
The morning after the Timberlake lovin'. Boy would I love to be in Cat's shoes, lol. The tabloid thing had be me worried for a moment. I was thinking Cat was going to freak out with the whole nine yards about losing her privacy, etc, etc. Thank goodness she shrugged it off. OMG! The drama going on in Cat's life is insane. I'd piss if nobody called if one of my parents were hospitalized. There's no excuse for that and Sophie. . .aww, Malcolm's an asshole! Cat better meet up with him and give him a piece of her mind, lol. That was a lovely little chapter and thanks for replying to our reviews the best way you could ;)
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/05 - 08:16PM
Title: A Sudden Exit
Aw, I haven't been replying :( But good job as usual! Cat didn't flip out about the tabloid!? Shocking, she's improving..a little bit ;) Now she's got to go home, I wonder how Justin will react? Hmm..update soon
Reviewer: Amber - Jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/05 - 06:42PM
Title: A Sudden Exit
that was good! really good job hun! can't wiat for more.
Reviewer: Vincenza
Anonymous
Date: 05/03/05 - 05:48PM
Title: Feeling Good
I think it's good that she wants to do something about her insecurities.
Suggestion:(please don't bite my head off it's only a suggestion) okay i was thinking that maybe Justin should like go somewhere because an artist that he wants to work with is too busy to come to NY, so Cat being supportive lets him go for a couple of months or so. And after a week or so, figuring she has nothing better to do she starts working out, and she starts looking and feeling great. And Justin comes home and is like ...whoa! And this could also create more drama because Justin has some insecurities of his own: jealousy for one.
end suggestion.
please don't be offended by my suggestion and think that I think you are doing alousy job because you're not. I love what you're doing with the story. I just thought of this and was like wow it'd be cool if this happened. But if you don't think it's cool, then it's not. Whatever you do, I will love this story!
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 05/03/05 - 11:52AM
Title: Feeling Good
“I’m having a relaxing bath,” calls out Trace’s voice from inside the bathroom. .....That part had me laughing so hard. I liked this chapter..I cant help but think that something bad's gonna happen......more soon!
Reviewer: Krissy
Anonymous
Date: 05/03/05 - 05:58AM
Title: Feeling Good
Very nice chapter. I feel really bad for Cat and I hope she will start feeling better about herself. This line had me laughing out loud “I’m having a relaxing bath,” calls out Trace’s voice from inside the bathroom. It was great how you put that in there right in the middle of Cat and Justin's argument. Looking forward to the next update, so don't make me wait to long.
Reviewer: Drea
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/05 - 09:11PM
Title: Feeling Good
Best argument ever.!!!!!!
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/05 - 07:46PM
Title: Feeling Good
Well since he in the mood to make people feel really good then he can come over here cause I need it like now . She need see somebody about her problem cause she gon have a heart attack . I had to learn to love myself no matter what. I dealt with it my scars from surgery to my weight and after a while you learn that somethings you can change and some you can't if she got a problem with her weight he right lose it but no matter what she got to be comfortable with herself first . Great chap as always can't wait for more
Reviewer: Jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/05 - 05:43PM
Title: Feeling Good
Awesome chapter my dear, i loved the argument! gotta put some arguments in stories or it's just pointless to have the couples happy all the time! but i love it i love it i love it! keep up the good work.
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