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Reviewer: sarahj
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 01:44PM
Title: None
I'm so sorry! I replied to your reveiw update on the first chapter by mistake! whoops I'm a dork ;(
Reviewer: sarahj
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 01:41PM
Title: What Brought Us Here?
It's no problem. And yeah I got all excited....I was almost shocked at the rate of updates (hey, that rhythms!) but it's ok ;)
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 01:35PM
Title: None
Oh thats alright then, for a moment I thought you didn't love me anymore :( :p Oh and by the way... TEASE! I thought another update was too good to be true.
Reviewer: Krissy
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 06:35AM
Title: What Brought Us Here?
You always have me laughing when I read your chapters this one was no different. The whole part with Justin and Trace playing like little kids was hilarious. And also the part where they are trying to find out how many guys Cat sleept with and if they were better than Justin funny stuff. Justin is such a girl. Great chapter and update soon. You don't have anything to do besides writing anyway, do you?
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 04:48AM
Title: Two of a Kind
T-Unit? T-Unit? I actually guffawed when I read that lol. What freaks, really. I loved how Justin has little insecurities too, so sweet. Great update
Reviewer: sarahj
Signed
Date: 04/12/05 - 03:39AM
Title: Two of a Kind
I agree with Gigi...there was so much I want to comment on in that chapter(every bit of it good) but I don't know how much space I have! Firstly, T-Unit and Commander! Our boys just don't grow up do they. Bandanas and warpaint, I've never laughed at a computer screen so much in my life lol! Secondly, Justin's melting my heart, he really is. Just how compassionately he talks to Cat, how proctective he is, his rather cute jealousy problem. Oh god, it's making me crazy how muhc I want to know the "Crossing Paths" and "This Love" Justin! And also the ghetto fab talk...J Dawg lol! And yes, I've never thought how incestuous 'mami' and 'papa' were but you've put the Snoop Dog phrases in a whole new light. "My bitch" lol! An excellent update...I loved every second of reading this. [[Oh yeah I forgot...34 women Trace?!! Wow, do I even want to know the number for Justin??!]]
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/05 - 09:59PM
Title: Two of a Kind
Lol, they had a fort? lol and fake walkie talkies? That's cute and weird at the same time lol Great chapter, they are two of a kind, aww. Update again soon :D
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 04/11/05 - 08:53PM
Title: Two of a Kind
Aww that was too cute! Justin and Trace are such IDIOTS. Typical male....lmao. The whole, "Do you read me commander" thing was hillarious. Heh heh.
Justin & Cat are such a cute couple. Aww hahaha.....I love them. Great chapppppter. You need to update again--even though you just did...mwuahaha. I want more! :p
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/05 - 08:53PM
Title: Two of a Kind
There was so much to say about that one chapter where do I begin. It was adorable, sweet, funny and sincere oh I could go on but I won't.
Author's Response: Oh but I do love it when people go on! lol But I think you summed it up with those words of yours, so thank you!
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/05 - 08:41PM
Title: Two of a Kind
That chapter was absolutely adorable! I loved it. more soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanks!
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