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Reviewer: Brit
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/05 - 06:20PM
Title: Getting what you want by whatever is necesssary
Just thought about something else. I remember in one chapter i think justin said he wanted kids all made from love where u take a little of two ppl to make babies or somethin. Then at the end u said they all looked like him so does that mean something possibly?
Reviewer: Brit
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/05 - 02:17AM
Title: Getting what you want by whatever is necesssary
lol boogers and crows feet! Anywho I like the way you write. Your kinda quick pace. I did kinda think it was cute the way justin was so in love with her but i started to get scared cuz it was like he was following her like a stalker or something. At the the end i was like yay they had a family and were married but at the same time i was like hmmm but was that truly what she wanted? Gives me the shivies. But great job though! Got me tah read'n!
Reviewer: virgin_dreams
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/04 - 02:58PM
Title: Getting what you want by whatever is necesssary
I loved the story, but it was freaky. If I was her i would have told Justin to F*** off if he had treated me like that.
Reviewer: virgin_dreams
Signed
Date: 08/26/04 - 08:38PM
Title: The plan
I really love this story so far, but i gotta go to sleep for school in the morning, i really wanna keep reading though :(
Author's Response: aw boo school!! j/k I can't believe school is back in this early! Jeez. Well thanks for reading and replying, hope ya have a good day!
Reviewer: Lauren
Anonymous
Date: 07/23/04 - 10:09PM
Title: All falls down
Loved it, Loved it, Loved it...and the way Justin turned psycho at the end was RaNdOm but fit soo well:) I'm a big fan of your writing.
Reviewer: Audrey
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/04 - 11:29AM
Title: Getting what you want by whatever is necesssary
I like this. It's a cool idea. Good job man! Love those POVs. lol
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/04 - 03:55AM
Title: When it all began
hmm...
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