Have any of your stories ever made somone cry? This one had me balling! I guess caus I've lost too many people in my life to Cancer. Okay, if I don't stop talking, I'mma cry again! This was amazing!

I honestly meant to review this a long time ago, & i dont think i did so i apologize. But this story was amazing, and you picked a wonderful CD to base it on. I'm gonna start reading the sequel!

That story was amazing... i bawled like a baby... you have a real knack for showing emotion in stories.. keep up the good work.

Okay so. I finally finished this story. I read this story out of your many stories to choose from because I'm in love with John Legend, honestly. But, then reading more obviously made me very enthralled. This story was so sad, and depressing at times, but nonetheless...extremely well written. I loved the way you allowed me to get into Justin's head-what he was thinking, what he did and didn't want to say at times as well. Being a Christian, I also loved how you had religion play a role in this story. I was also happy, that you weren't trying to force Christianity on the readers, but you were showing how hard it could be to be dedicated to one's faith. Now, maybe I've just over-analyzed this story too much and you were simply writing around John Legend's CD. LoL. I will say this though, on a lighter note, this was the first story that I've read where the author uses songs to convey a story with feelings, and does it well. So, I look forward to reading more of your works soon. Maybe next time, my review won't be so lengthy! Awesome job! -Melanie

Author's Response: LOL! Damn, this is a husky ass review, Melanie, but every word is appreciated. I love John Legend myself, so I had to write something uses his incredible lyrics. The story was a downer, but I wanted to write something dramatic. I'm glad you enjoyed the Christian aspect because I'm Catholic, so I had to rep the Lord, LOL! Thank you, thank you, thank you a million times over for all your compliments and thanks for the lovely review =)

Oh my God. I finally mustered up the strength to read this. Oh God. It was so sad. When Josie gave her that bear--my throat tightened, my eyes got watery. And then when he came up and he felt something was wrong. Oh god, *BawL* It's so nice that they had that one last day together that was nice...but..........oh *More tears* .....shiver.......oh so sad. This was such a beautiful great story, but I'm just so sad for Justin and Josie right now. I know they'll eventually move on and everything.....but ---see you've got me all boggled, I can't even form complete sentences. Well, I'm gonna go grab myself a tissue. Lol. :(

Author's Response: Awww, I felt so bad writing this story, LOL. Everybody's crying and shit, and I feel like I'm the bringer of depression or something, LOL. The last day together was nice. I thought I'd ease her pain and not let her suffer like I planned, LOL. Yeah, I'm that evil, lol. Just kidding, lol. Anywho, thanks for the review, sugar.