Reviewer: Ani
AnonymousDate: 03/21/05 - 11:22PM
Title: Number One
My, my. That was a heart wrenching chapter. The whole plot and the John Legends songs mesh together oh so perfectly. Oh and Justin and Josie's talk. Mmm mmm, I cried. I cried. rofl. I pray that Nakia pulls through and everything will be all hunky dory again. :D LOVELY.
Author's Response: LOL! You sound like my friend, Stace. She's always saying my, my, lol. Thanks so much for reading along Ani. Justin and Josie's convo was a tearjerker. Her innocence is such a heart breaker, lol. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: E
AnonymousDate: 03/21/05 - 09:25PM
Title: Number One
EVERYtime, EVERYtime, you get me. No matter how many times I say I am not going to cry when I read the new chapter, I still end up crying. By the way I love that you are using John Legend songs, that is such a great album. Anyway getting back to me crying, your story is just soooo emotional. Every chapter draws me in and I cry like I know the characters personally. I LOVE it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks, E. I love John Legend's album and I thought I'd do a little promoting for him, lol. I'm glad you're drawn in, I'm really flattered by your review. I'll keep it coming. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Michelle
AnonymousDate: 03/21/05 - 09:20PM
Title: Number One
Damn it! Another chapter that made me cry. You're getting too good at this. And it's an amazing chapter too. I couldn't believe it when she told Justin that she didn't love him anymore. But I can't blame her. I would probably say the same thing as well.
Author's Response: LOL! Score, Michelle cried! LOL! Just kidding. . . maybe, lol. Well, I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter as well. I can't blame her either, he did cheat. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Teeny
AnonymousDate: 03/21/05 - 09:41AM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
Stupid, stupid man, always thinking about who he can get into his pants...at least he ended it when he realized that he had something even better at home. I really hated him for a second there, why would he do that do his freaking wife and daughter? But we all make mistakes, and hopefully that was his only one. God, just when i think everything gets better I'm reminded Nakia is helpless in a hospital bed and it gets me all depressed again...the sign of a true author ;)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, sugar. I'm having a really bad day and your review was a highlight in all my gloom. I appreciate you reading and reviewing, as usual. And it's truly an honor to be recognized as a true author by you. Thank you.
Reviewer: Helena
AnonymousDate: 03/20/05 - 04:56AM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
:( I don't know why but I think that's the saddest chapter yet, maybe it's because it shows they've been through Hell and back but are still together only this time there's nothing to stop it or something, but it really tugged hard at my heartstrings. BOO JESSICA! I've decided to blame her for everything bad that's happened to Justin and Nakia, it isn't her fault, I just want to vent me anger and frustration lol. Yet again another fantastic chapter, showing the downsides as well as the upsides of their relationship was a smart move, it really makes them seem... I guess more human in a way, and that makes the story all the more powerful. I'm still rooting for the two of them to be together forever even though I know that's not possible, sounds dumb but... well... tough lol
Author's Response: LOL! Damn, I've gotta ease up on the sadness, lol. J/K. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, Helena. Vent your anger, boo Jessica! LOL! I wanted Nakia and Justin to be human because well, they are, lol. I wanted it to be real and I'm glad you think it is. Your thoughts aren't dumb, they're optimistic, lol.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 03/19/05 - 09:23PM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
LOL, I'm such a dork. I love Alfie so much that I found some way to connect that chapter to the movie. The whole relationship with Jessica reminded me of Alfie and Nikki. And if you haven't seen the movie, well... shame on you lol. But as I was saying, yes... it all seemed very toxic. Even if it was genuinely fun and seemed enticing, it was just right for all the WRONG reasons. Ugh. Men. They just don't know how to do anything right. When there's a problem, you work through it. You don't cheat, you SINNER. No, I'm kidding lol. I'm a weak little thing. I would've succumbed to the thought of something new, too. But then, I don't believe in marriage either, so I wouldn't be in that situation to begin with. But dude, if you're gonna take a damn vow, your ass better stick to it like glue. See, shit like this is why I don't believe in marriage. Nobody is ever doin' what they're supposed to be doin'. If you know you can't be with one person for the rest of your life, don't get married, stoopid. Damn. And I'm just rambling like an idiot lol. Wonderful chapter, girl. I'm glad Justin got out of that infidelity thing, cuz I was ready to go tell Nakia myself. I hope her reaction sends his head spinning so he doesn't even think about another woman again. Nakia might not cuss him out, but I damn sure will. Keep it comin'!
Author's Response: LOL!
I've never seen Alfie, but I want to so badly because Jude Law. . . damn, lol. Justin really did do a bad thing because he's a guy. You know that man=stupid, lol. It was a sin. It does make you want to not get married. Especially if Mr. Perfect turns out to be as wrong as any other man. Babble all you want, Ashley. I'll read every line and love every word. It lets me know you're really into my story and you always give me a little something to think about. Nakia might not curse him out, but she did make him see that nobody else could give him what he needed. You'll just have to wait and see how. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Michelle
AnonymousDate: 03/19/05 - 05:56PM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
Yeah, Justin should be thankful that things worked out in the end for him. I can't believe he cheated on her. And that Jessica girl, well, she's just a ho. She offered him her number when she was already engaged with no hestitation. Tsk, tsk, tsk. I'm curious how you're going to have Nakia's reaction. Please update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! You know I've gotta give Nakia her moment of revenge, lol. Justin cheating was an upset. I almost didn't write it, lol. Jessica is a whore. A very "friendly" whore, lol. I'll update soon, girl. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenoritaSignedDate: 03/19/05 - 04:58PM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
Justin is definitely no saint. But I would've been worried if he hadn't felt guilty. Which he did ..in no way am I saying that, that excuses anything. But that Jessica girl was a whore ..in my book. Who ..just happen to run into Justin at a time that he was vulnerable. But had he loved his wife like he claimed ..he wouldn't have let that happen. Shame on you, Justin. Shame on YOU! When will guys learn to start thinking with the head ABOVE their shoulders. Everybody say it with me. THINK WITH THE HEAD ABOVE YOUR SHOULDERS! ..that is all.
Author's Response: LOL! Oh man, I was cracking up reading this. LOL Ease up on the funniness, will ya? LOL! Yes, above the shoulders thinking is key! I'll let Justin know that, lol
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 03/19/05 - 04:39PM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
Another great chapter. I wanted cry and kick his ass at the same time.
Author's Response: LOL! Got you all twisted up inside, don't I? LOL!
Reviewer: UTCBeauty
AnonymousDate: 03/19/05 - 04:33PM
Title: She Don't Have To Know
THAT BASTARD!!!!!! how dare he run out on her like that. and that jessica chick has some nerve, "just call me" pssht..whatever. by the way did they sleep together, or did they just hang out, you may have said it but i did notice, can't wait for the update
Author's Response: LOL! You called Justin a bastard, *gasp* LOL! Well, I'll clarified exactly what happened later, lol. Thanks, UTC.
