Reviewer: whtny
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 11:00PM
Title: I Can Change
Grl u are breakin mah
Author's Response: I'm sorry, whtny. But it's keeping you with me! LOL! Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 10:09PM
Title: I Can Change
I loved this chapter cus it didn't make me cry as much. lol It was still FREAKIN` AWESOME. :D Justin was hilarious for making her mad. He made Kia curse! That's impossible! Haha. She straight up knocked him OUT. Hahahahaha. Just cus she's a quiet girl doesn't mean she won't bust yo` lights, Justin. *:D Fantabulous!
Author's Response: LOL! Writing that punching scene was fun for me. I had experience in that area, so I gave you a little taste of my life, lol. I'm glad I saved you some tears, hopefully you'll need them later, lol. Thanks so much for always reading and reviewing, Ani. It's always appreciated.
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 08:40PM
Title: I Can Change
Okay ..I didn't comment on the last chapter. I haven't been feeling well. But okay ..Granted, Justin DID call it off ..but I think Nakia gave up too soon. It was months and stuff and I respect that ..but even if he didn't sleep with her he KISSED her ..he spent time with another woman that wasn't completely platonic to him. And that's cheating. No matter how innocent, or however many problems you had. It's still CHEATING. I can also respect his changing for her. But he shouldn't have to change who he is now that he's done something wrong. He should want to be a better man for her regardless. I know they went through therapy and she stood her ground ..but still ..Justin, Justin, Justin. What can I say? OH! I love 'I'll Be Good For You.' Gosh ..I love that freakin' song. Haha ..why did you have to hate on it girl? I liked the fact that he wanted her to hit him though. That takes out frustration. I knew he was pushing it when he said that Jessica line. Wow ..I loved this chapter ..I have to say. Even though ..I hate what Justin did ..i'm glad she was able to forgive him. I didn't know Josie wasn't his! Did I miss something? lolol ...i must have. Anyways good as usual.
Author's Response: LOL! I'm feeling well either! (Damn cold), but anywho, I know that it's been months and months, and it seems like she gave up easily, but has she? lol. Josie is his! Justin mocking a tabloid story, lol. Thanks so much for the review. I hope you feel better, sugar.
Reviewer: UTCBeauty
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 05:43PM
Title: Number One
omg when she said i dont love you all i could say was dayum
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: nini22
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 12:16PM
Title: Prelude
Why couldn't he just be honest with his wife. Ok I just have to ask did he sleep with ole girl or did they just really hang out.
Author's Response: Patience, my dear. Patience. We will get to that in just a moment, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 11:24AM
Title: Number One
I agree with Ash..."MAKE IT STOP!". Excuse me, I must go blow my nose. *sniffs* Two thumbs up.
Author's Response: LOL! I can't make it stop, what fun will that be? LOL! Thanks so much for the review, Nique. *Hands over a kleenex* It's okay, sugar. It's okay, lol
Reviewer: Ash
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 09:42AM
Title: Number One
Damn. While Love & Trust gave off the 'What-The-Fuck' vibe, this story has a constant 'NOOOOOO-Make-It-Stop!' theme going on. Seriously, make it stop! You break my heart every time I click on a new chapter. But you know what? You break my heart so beautifully that I don't even mind having a tear-soaked keyboard when I'm done. There's so much power behind everything that's happening here. We're watching them break up, not really realizing until the chapter is over that it all happened in the past; and the harsh reality of the present situation is that Nakia is slipping away. So there's a double heartwrenching ordeal in every chapter. So sad, but so freakin' good, dude. Man, I love the way you can make me cry and then crack me up in the same breath. When Kia threw that phone at him, I know it's wrong, but I cracked up. Too bad she didn't clock his ass. But oh well... there's time lol. Damn, I'm like a minute from being late to class. And I'm not even dressed yet! See what your story does to me? lol Not that I mind, though. Keep, keep, keep it up, homie!
Author's Response: LOL! I have a 'Make it stop' vibe now. I'm so proud, lol. This review is just wow. I'm glad that I'm breaking your heart in a way that you can deal with and want again, lol. If that even makes sense, lol. I know, with Nakia going in the present and with the drama of the past, things are a bit crazy. I'm not gonna front, I cried a little when I read this over myself, lol. I'm such a loser! LOL! Oh well, I'm an emotional freak like the rest of ya'll. I laughed when she threw the phone too, lol. And believe me, there's time, lol. Thanks so much for the review, homes. I will definitely keep it coming.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 07:23AM
Title: Number One
Josie is just precious. When she said 'What if I'm never happy again?' I think my heart broke. For like the millionth time this story lol. I can understand where Justin is coming from but he has to understand Nakias side too, she can't exactly hear him say sorry and just get over it. Her heart monitor stopping is scaring my majorly, and it happened when Josie said 'I hate God'. Damn (Pardon the pun lol). Update soooooon
Author's Response: Josie is precious. When kids are involved, it makes things a lot harder. I'm glad that you have sympathy for both of them and understand Justin's side of things. It was a coincidence that her heart stopped when Josie said she hated God, lol. We'll have to wait and see what happens with that. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Brittany
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 07:16AM
Title: Number One
I love this story! It is so amazing. I love how you have the John Legend songs meshed in too! I hate crying when i read stories like this!! Update soon.
Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry Brittany, but I don't even plan for this to be so emotional, lol. I'm glad you like the John Legend songs and how they go with every chapter. I will update soon. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 01:14AM
Title: Number One
Damn! I think my heart is breaking.
Author's Response: NO! *hands Gigi some Elmer's glue* Put it back together! LOL!
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