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Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/05 - 12:43PM
Title: One
That was. . . wow. I'm still shocked, lol. That was beautiful, tho. They are so in love and I'm glad that you didn't leave that part out. Bravo, sugar. Bravo.
Author's Response: Shocked is good. Thank you. It was my first visual, so I'm really pleased that people enjoyed it so much.
Reviewer: Aysia
Signed
Date: 03/17/05 - 08:58AM
Title: One
Gorgeous. That's all I have to say about it. What you wrote was very sultry and passionate as well as erotic, if you catch my drift. LOL. I liked that it wasn't like a cheap porno like some of the other visuals that I've read. You made sure with the back history that we knew how far the characters had come so when they shared that experience it was that much more intense. I commend ya, girl! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the awesome compliment. That's actually what I was trying to accomplish, so I'm glad you saw it that way. What good is the sex if you know nothing about the people having it, right?
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 03/17/05 - 03:07AM
Title: One
Oh my gosh, Lisa. I'm hurt. You never even told me you were writing this....and you don't ever even come on aim anymore...and and...and...you never even talk to me anymore. You don't love me anymore.... *sniffle* *sniffle*...
I haven't even talked to you in like...MONTHS....
Blah blah blah....Okay, now that I'm done with my crying...
That was so great! So hot. You're awesome, but of course you already knew that, because I always tell you. Oh yeah, and you didn't even ADD me to your favorites....ANOTHER BIG NO POINTS FOR LISA....
Well, I have to go cry now.
Love ya,
Jess
Author's Response: Aww, I didn't even plan on writing this. It was a spur of the moment thing. Somebody asked me to write a visual, so I did. I went on AIM looking for you to read it before I posted it, but you weren't there. I was thinking of you. Honest. And I added you to my favorites, which I just figured out how to do because I'm stupid like that. LOL. I love you, Jess! *mwuah*
Reviewer: Erin
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 11:22PM
Title: One
That was... wow! You go into such great detail. Love it. Wow. lol. You're a very talented writer!
Author's Response: The details are the best part! Heh. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you for the compliment.
Reviewer: whtny
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 09:17PM
Title: One
fans self...nice work
Author's Response: I got hot just writing it. Ha! Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 07:40PM
Title: One
Two thumbs up
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 07:37PM
Title: One
::says in best Paris Hilton voice:: Now that's hot! Lol
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: lil jb
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 07:14PM
Title: One
that was good. i liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad.
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