Reviews For Alone in the dark
Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 04/08/05 - 08:26PM Title: Chapter 5

Why did you have to end it there! You better update soon.

Author's Response: I thought it was a great place to stop. You don't agree? LOL


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 04/04/05 - 06:22AM Title: Chapter 4

Evil. Evil. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIL! Gee, wonder who I'm talking about... Obviously Joey lol. You better update soon, this story is getting addictive damn it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean. That Joey is a real son of a bitch. LOL I'll try really hard to get the next chapter out in the next couple of days. I'm currently writing the next chapter to my other story, but don't worry this one will also get updated soon.


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 04/03/05 - 05:28PM Title: Chapter 4

Will JC get there in time! Will Tony accept that JC doesn't want him! What will happen to JC! All the questions to be answered in the next chapter of Alone in the Dark. Stay tuned.

Author's Response: I serioulsy laughed out loud. Maybe at the end of this chapter I should've said brought to you by the makers of Budweisser beer. LOL


Reviewer: Joeylance Anonymous Date: 04/01/05 - 10:43AM Title: Chapter 3

Ewwww! Now I was a Biology major, BUT THAT SEWING UP PART BY JUSTIN MADE MY SKIN CRAWL. Good thing it wasn't JC or he's be dead now! Great job and Tony is a lying sack of scumbag disgustiveness! Of and I still don't like him!!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 03/30/05 - 01:19PM Title: Chapter 3

That scene where Justin had to sew himself up had me trembling! I almost screamed but I managed to keep it under control. Ahhh!

Author's Response: It seems the scene with Justin sewing himself up has made quite the impression. LOL Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: Gena Anonymous Date: 03/30/05 - 12:24PM Title: Chapter 3

EWW. UGH, That was horrible! I winced through that whole thing! ugh lol! I don't think I could ever do that. I can't even build up a response I'm so grossed out right now! Good update though. lol :)

Author's Response: I think we might all be amazed at what we could do if it was a life or death situation. :D At least I didn't write the scene out after he stuck in the needle. I got the willy's myself. But, it had to be written. LOL


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 03/30/05 - 12:11PM Title: Chapter 3

Very true. TONY IS A SICK BARSTAD! Can you tell I don't like him? Lol. I seriously winced at the thought of having to sew yourself up, seriously that is twisted, but I imagine hes in a whole lot of pain anyway, and it needs to be done, he just needs to focus. But yeah... eek. This story really does build up suspense, damn it. Justin has found a way of survival and the police know hes still alive. Update pretty please *puppydog eyes*

Author's Response: I really never would've guessed you disliked Tony. LOL I'm not sure why, he is such a sweetheart in this story. :D I also winced as I wrote the Justin scene. Thank God it wasn't JC, he never would've gotten the needle out. I'll see what I can do about updating soon. Thanks again.


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 03/29/05 - 05:02AM Title: chapter 2

Evil evil EEEEEEEVIL! I never liked Tony Luccas stuff anyway lol. Well I do but... well you know! This is a really awesome story, through this situation the reader really gets to see each characters true personality. And Tony is EVIL! Evil evil evil. Evil. Lol. Update soon

Author's Response: I would say you pretty much summed Tony up in 1 word. EVIL LOL Thanks again for the feedback. :D


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 03/28/05 - 07:52PM Title: chapter 2

That sick SOB he really thought this through didn't he. I mean stealing Justin's blood from the hospital come on!

Author's Response: I'm definitely getting the reaction towards Tony I wanted. LOL Thanks for the feedback. :D


Reviewer: Joeylance Anonymous Date: 03/28/05 - 09:51AM Title: Chapter 1

I figured that the dark place you have to go to write "Point of No Return" was getting to you. Who knew it would spawn another great story. Anyway, Tony is a total sleaze bag jerk who deserves to rot in a place of eternal torment forever. Redundant? Did I mention I didn't like him? Great job as usual!!

Author's Response: yes, it was definitely getting to me. But, then I turn around and actually put Justin in a dark place, so who knows. LOL I'm thinking you don't like Tony in this story, I could just be misreading your comment. LOL Thanks for the feedback. :D





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