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Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 09/07/05 - 09:53PM
Title: Prologue: The Last Day
Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/05 - 05:33PM
Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Wooden Spoons and Knifes
Loved this chapter. More soon please.
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/07/05 - 07:49PM
Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Wooden Spoons and Knifes
Jc is opening up! that's great start for him! and for his relatioshop with Emily!
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 08/05/05 - 06:08PM
Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Wooden Spoons and Knifes
I know I've probably told you this before, but I'm gonna tell you again; I love, love, love the dialogue in this story! I think JC and Emily have a really good chemistry together, and you're able to convey that with the dialogue. I also like how they're gradually softening to one another instead of one day fighting and the next day being best friends. I don't like stories that jump from one extreme to the other, and yours has a good balance. That's one of the reasons why I like it so much!
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/05 - 06:51PM
Title: Chapter 6: Common interests and a soft touch
I thought that moment at the end was sweet. I hope there is more to come soon.
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 09:16PM
Title: Chapter 6: Common interests and a soft touch
I love the way they argue, it cracks me up! I also loved the little tender moment they had when she was playing with his hair, very sweet!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 08:30AM
Title: Chapter 6: Common interests and a soft touch
I 'm glad Jc left his boots at home for once. haha
And that they are at least 'having a conversation'
lOL
Keep the story coming!
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 07/19/05 - 06:47PM
Title: Chapter 5: Untitled
Ah! I love how they torment each other in class! It makes me laugh. lol The dialogue between them is really good, and I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/05 - 11:03AM
Title: Chapter 5: Untitled
Ha ha ha, JC is so gonna be pussywhipped. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/05 - 10:43AM
Title: Chapter 5: Untitled
Woooo! Hot ! he likes her and can't even admit it =D
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