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Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/05 - 06:53PM
Title: Chapter 4: Nice conversation
Aww, our first glimpse at the compassionate side to JC! I love it! I also like how just when you think he's gonna start being nice to her, he starts telling himself again that she's a bitch. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/05 - 01:49PM
Title: Chapter 4: Nice conversation
I hope they hook up! LOL
And I wish she at least can be friends with him..he's so lonely LOL
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/05 - 11:45AM
Title: Chapter 4: Nice conversation
He's gonna get hooked on her, I can tell lol. Good chapter!
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 09:05PM
Title: Chapter 3: Confrontations
Another great chapter! I can just feel the sexual tension between those two, and it's great! I'm glad you didn't make her intimidated by JC either because I'm sure a lot of girls would be. I already get the sense that she has a lot of self confidence, which is just the kind of girl JC needs in his life; someone who isn't gonna take crap from him! Way to go!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 02:04PM
Title: Chapter 3: Confrontations
Hmm... a likeable jerk, I've don't think I've ever read about one of those before lol. He has good and bad points, we'll leave it at that lol. Great to see you updating!
Reviewer: s. carter
Anonymous
Date: 05/19/05 - 08:18PM
Title: Chapter 2: Rough First Day
katie, it sucked..jk.hahaha..i skimmed through it a lil..since i dont read much.. =D good job.. mrs. rudolph would be proud.. ( i think-- you may even get a passing grade)
Author's Response: Sammm! hahaha you loser! :P Mrs. rudolph would give me like an F minus! YESSSS!!!! I passed!
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/05 - 02:04PM
Title: Chapter 2: Rough First Day
Another great chapter! I really liked how you mentioned JC playing basketball when he was younger and how that was part of the reason why he didn't like to play anymore. That gave me a good idea of the kind of childhood he had that led him to become the person he is today. Keep that up!
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 04/02/05 - 10:41AM
Title: Chapter 2: Rough First Day
i loved the emotions Jc in this story....it really capture what Jc feels about this whole story...and it is just wonderful!!!! I love how you describe every little detail throughout the chapter...great job!!!
Reviewer: helena
Signed
Date: 04/02/05 - 08:45AM
Title: Chapter 2: Rough First Day
Intruiging... I wonder what happened to the girl. I'm not sure on what I think about JCs attitude; is it care free or is it ignorant? Yet again another wonderfullly descriptive chapter, I particularly liked it when he looked out the window at the trees wanting to draw them but didn't have the right materials. I don't know why, it just stuck out. Good work!
Reviewer: sarahj
Anonymous
Date: 03/31/05 - 07:19AM
Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
It's been said over and over again...but this really is descriptive! And the image of their new house...it's really quite sad. Great update ;)
Author's Response: Lol yeah, it has been said, but yeah it's kinda pitiful, but that's what kinda life JC has :\
Thanks so much for replying! :D
Katie
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