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Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/31/05 - 05:37AM
Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Another very good chapter, I really do love how descriptive this story is, you really gave a good impression of what the house was like. Good work!
Author's Response: Why thank you! Glad you could really see what i was trying to describe.
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/31/05 - 03:25AM
Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Again, that was very descriptive, which really works because I'm a lazy ass and like just being TOLD what the place they're in looks like! lol Great update, although I really hope they get his house sorted out! lol I hate mess...
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad I can support your laziness :-P But yeah, that was my first time really explaining what a room looks like. I don't normally do that , lol
But thankks for replying, and yeah the house will be sorted out, dont you worry :)
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 03/30/05 - 05:44PM
Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
how sad.....i had to move away from everything too...i exactly know how Jc's character feels update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry, but hopefully for you and JC it won't be so bad once he moves. lol Thanks soo much for replying :D
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 03/30/05 - 04:30PM
Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
This was a great chapter! I love how JC is a tough guy, yet he has a soft side to him that shows through with the way he took care of a cat since it was little and the way he is around his mom. I really like that about him! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: you're original today :) Thanks, Ashley. I appreicate that you took time to reply to my story! You rock, lol
Reviewer: jelli
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 01:35PM
Title: Prologue: The Last Day
I really like the start of this. Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! :-D Keep on reading!
Reviewer: sarahj
Signed
Date: 03/28/05 - 11:59AM
Title: Prologue: The Last Day
This was a fantastic beginning. JC's emotions are quite powerful and it's through all the small details you can relate to a character most. Am eagerly awaiting an update ;)
Author's Response: Wow, i never knew my words that explained JC's emotions were powerful, thank you! I'm gonna be updating soon :)
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 11:42AM
Title: Prologue: The Last Day
Great job so far! I can already anticipate something big happening, and I've only read the prologue! You've got a good eye for detail, yet that isn't the only thing you focus on, which is good. You have a good balance of description and dialogue, both of which are essential in making a great story. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: You copier! lol jp. thanks for your review :P Balance of description and dialogue, i try. lol Once again , thankkksssss sooo much! lol you always read my stories
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 11:40AM
Title: Prologue: The Last Day
I really liked the beginning of this story, very descriptive which really gives you a good grasp of JC and the type of life hes leaving. I'm keeping an eye out for an update!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I'm glad you want to continue my story! and i'm glad you think it's descriptive too :) sometimes too descriptive heh. The update should be soon!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/28/05 - 11:29AM
Title: Prologue: The Last Day
A really excellent start! It was very descriptive and already I have a feel for JC's character, which is hard to create in the prologue or first chapter. This is definitely a story I'm going to be looking out for, so great job!
Author's Response: My first reviewer! thank you so much! I'm glad you have a feel of JC's character, you're gonna be getting more of a feel for him in the next couple of chapters too. I'm also glad you still wanna read it after just the prologue! thanks again!
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