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Reviewer: Singleton27
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/06 - 07:45PM
Title: Part Four
Please do a sequal to this story or continue writing to this one becuase it was really fantastic!!!
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 05/12/06 - 11:46PM
Title: Part Four
I really hope there's a sequal to this story cause you can't just leave it like that. But I'm confused... one scene they're happy and in Mexico, in the next scenes he's abusing her than she's escaping the abuse, and then she's NOT? I'm kinda confused but I'll read it again and try to figure it out...lol. Great story though... sad, but good.
Reviewer: lroberts
Anonymous
Date: 04/19/05 - 08:47AM
Title: Part One
I'm such a bad person. I haven't been reviewing ANYTHING. But I'm back duna duna duna under ya skin like a splinta...er, sorry. *wipes away a tear* This made me cry. Which takes some major talent, teenybobeeny. I mean, WHY CAN'T SHE GET AWAY??!!??! Just call Joey damnit. And Justin, why you motherfucking womanizer beatboxing POS!! Ahem...I'm better....
Reviewer: Anita
Signed
Date: 04/18/05 - 07:38AM
Title: Part Four
This story was really well written and I enjoyed reading it. And although the end was pretty sad it´s probably how it really is. That women just can´t leave their abusiv husband although they know that it would be the best to just leave and never come back.
Anita
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/05 - 04:50PM
Title: Part Four
YOU ARE SO CRUEL!! I THOUGHT SHE WAS GONNA BE HAPPY!!! BUT IT WAS JUST A DREAM!! ARGH!!!! I WANT HER TO BE OK!! Leave him, honey! Leave Justin!!!
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 04/15/05 - 04:37PM
Title: Part Four
:( Sad. I don't even know what to say. It was written very well, you did a great job. The ending is heartbreaking....
"This was her future; sitting in a room, numb with pain, surrounded by upturned furniture and shards of glass, wishing she was somewhere else." :/ :(
Reviewer: sarahj
Signed
Date: 04/15/05 - 04:14PM
Title: Part Four
I thought....I thought....but, I thought! Ok, so I genuinely believed this was it, everything she had dreamed about and Joey was the perfect savior. But...Christina, this has been said before, I know, but it really was powerful. This whole story was in fact. This is one of the best pieces of writing I have read in a while and what was different about it, was that it wasn't just one good chapter...the standard was constantly high. And that little heartbreaker of reality at the end, I've gotta tell you it was very nicely done. I mean, this was darn good stuff girl (yes, that's right..darn!) Fantastic...keep on writing, you have a definate talent. (This kiss ass session is officially over now!)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/05 - 03:37PM
Title: Part Four
Just when I think I can get my hopes up about her leaving them com crashing down because it's only dream! Stop doing that!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/05 - 03:26PM
Title: Part Four
Dammit, Teeny! Why didn't she call?? The story was amazing, you are an excellent writer. I loved it even though it made me sad.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/05 - 03:14PM
Title: Part Four
WFT???? LOL! OMG! That's so damn depressing! NOOOOOO! CALL! CALL! CALL! Damn it, Sarah! I thought you were smarter than that! OMG! I'm so upset right now. You had me all hyped up and excited. I'm like "YAY! She's leaving!" But BAM! Reality smacks me across the face and dreams don't come true. It breaks my heart. It really does.
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