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Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/05 - 01:14PM
Title: Part Four
Jesus. And yet, somehow I couldn't imagine it ending any other way, it wouldn't be as powerful and that was a SERIOUSLY powerful chapter. Fantastic work my dear! The fact that you made the reader think she had escaped and then brought me back to reality quickly, just like the first chapter. Poor woman :(
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 04/14/05 - 04:19PM
Title: Part Three
I need an update... come on teeny!!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/13/05 - 05:22PM
Title: Part One
We know you're not a porn writer...but we're just asking you to consider being one...please? LMAO
Well, since you asked so nicely. . . LOL. It's coming soon. I just have one more Get Lifted chapter and then I'll get working, lol. I hope you guys like it.
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 04/10/05 - 06:05PM
Title: Part Three
Eww--damn right no one can help that bastard. lol.
Argh, I really hate Justin's character in this story. What a fuckin' asshole. Makes me sick to my stomach.
I seriously hope Sarah leaves him. I think she's starting to realize, maybe? hopefully? that she needs to get out of this, that he's not going to change anytime soon....
Ideally, Justin will get help and they will seperate and somewehre along the line, he can be a good father to that poor child. That is, if she doesn't lose the child thanks to his idiot ass.
Lol well anyways. Beautifully written as usual. ;)
Author's Response: I hate Justin here too. I hate any person that hits another human being, male or female. I hope there can be help for Justin too, because in parts there are the rarest glimpses of him as a kind person there, but then he goes and screws it up by hitting her again. He's truly, well, fucked up, and it would be awful for his child to have to suffer from him. Damn, I sound so serious! lol Thanks for the review
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/09/05 - 08:23AM
Title: Part One
HOT SEX! MORE! MORE! MORE! Erm... yes... lovely weather don't you think? SEX! And I'm done :p
Author's Response: My sentiments exactly, Helena...lol
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 05:00PM
Title: Part One
HOT SEX! I don't know what you think I am, but I'm not a porn writer! LOL, Just kidding. There'll be hot sex, but will it be between Justin and Alonsha???? LOL I'm so dramatic. But yeah, hot sex is definitely a must. I'll get started on those HOT SEX scenes right away, LOL. I'm gonna join, just give my slow ass a sec to comprehend this hunk of machine called a computer.
Author's Response: We know you're not a porn writer...but we're just asking you to consider being one...please? LMAO
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 03:57PM
Title: Part One
ROFL! I never thought about that story like that. Ah, it adds another level to it don't you think? Lol.
Author's Response: LMAO Oh yeS...this is what the not so teenaged Teeny gets up to when she's not writing fan fictions...LOL
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 03:52PM
Title: Part One
And by the way, you have to confirm by email your username before you can post. Yay! though, we just need Timberlake to join us lol
Author's Response: LMAO I just read it...the first thing my eyes landed on was "Christina the whore" and I though man, Helena really doesn't like men, and she's not even hiding it... LOL And then it sort of hit...Aahh, Christina Aguilera! lol
Author's Response: LOL Sorry, not men, me.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 03:47PM
Title: Part One
I haven't put THAT particular one up just yet lol, but I am posting several others in the meantime. If it puts you in the forum index, click on 'Shania Twain' and you should see two posts by me (mtvjunkie). I think thats what you do, I've been a member for ages lol.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 03:14PM
Title: Part One
Yes! HOT SEX! YES! YES! LOL! Ps. I've found a place to post my subversive stories if you wanna go peak. Its used to be a Shania Twain forum but I took it over lol :P Oh, and you have to be a memberof the board to respond but you'll be in the delightful company of Ashley (BabyBlue2578) and me (mtvjunkie). Justin and a padded bra coming soon! Pps. the link is: http://abstracts.net/forum/index.php?s=50ca8ef2138c29ae10859c020c918752&act=SF&f=38 Ppps... I have too much time on my hands lol, I should really get a job
Author's Response: Oh man, join the club! What was the first thing I did when I saw a web link? Typed it up, of course! So I'm at Abstract, and I have registered at recordbreaking speed, how do I find this freaky deaky story I've been hearing so much about? lol My toolbar thingy isn't working, so I can't put in the adress
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