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Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 10:56AM
Title: Part Three
:( Please don't update the same days as 'Get lifted', I don't know if i could take all the sadness in one go lol. Very sad but still very... human. As strange as it sounds, the cracks in Justins malicious demeanour add something to his character. Great chapter my dear!
Author's Response: LMAO Hey, Get Lifted is much sadder than this! I suppose it isn't...but you should just channel all that sadness into, I dunno, hating Justin! lol But as you said, he isn't completely dark, occasionally you do see snippets of what he's like underneath it all. Thanks for reviewing Helena!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 09:15AM
Title: Part Three
Wow...in a good way of course That's all i can say, all of the emotions in here are so deep and powerful.
Author's Response: I'm glad it's in a good way! As I've said, I was trying to write quite a powerful story, so I'm glad that it seems to have worked and that you guys are reacting so wonderfully to it =) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 07:12AM
Title: Part Three
god ... that was just too painful to read.
sigh.
Author's Response: Is that good or bad? lol Thanks nonetheless!
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 04/04/05 - 10:33PM
Title: Part Three
all i can say is wow....there was just so much emotion put into this chapter...i love it Teeny...i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's definitely a very emotional story. At least, that's what I'm trying to make it! lol
Reviewer: brittany
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/05 - 08:27PM
Title: Part Three
awesome, once again. I'm thinking Justin can change. If he can show that sort of emotion towards her, even for a second, i think he can change. Anyway, great chapter, once again. I can't wait for you to update again, it's well worth the wait though :).
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I hope Justin can change too, because there seems to be a really confused man behind his asshole self...but I hate to make excuses for him, because abuse is just wrong, no matter how you say it!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/05 - 07:13PM
Title: Part Three
Justin is so shameful. She needs to get a divorce soon.
Author's Response: She should, but whether she will is a completely different matter. Thanks for the review =)
Reviewer: LetItBe613
Signed
Date: 04/04/05 - 06:55PM
Title: Part Three
Girl, it was totally awesomeness... (that might not be a word, but what the hell) You really have a great way with putting someone into the situation and getting them to believe it... Great job!
Author's Response: Awesomeness could be a word! lol I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: Awesomeness could be a word! lol I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/02/05 - 07:01AM
Title: Part Two
Thank you so much for showing a nicer side to Justin, I'm related to someone who used to be abusive and he is a nice guy, he just had a temper and is... well... an arsehole and a half most of the time, so you really captured that well. I worry about what Justins gonna do to her now though. Update soon!
Author's Response: I think everyone, men and women, have a dark side and a good side, and most learn to control it better than others. Justin sure is an "arsehole and a half" most of the time lol, but there are occasional lapses in his anger. Not in the next chapter though....lol thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Michelle
Signed
Date: 04/01/05 - 04:00PM
Title: Part Two
It's kind of hard to read this story, considering I've had my best friend in this type of situation, so if I don't review as much, I apologize. I think you're doing an amazing job with the story. Justin is obviously an asshole. I think when he's sleeping, she should just cut off that ahem...special area of his. ;)
Author's Response: lol Yes, and thereby destroy his power...lol I completely understand if the story is hard to read, it's very difficult to write as well. It's some form of twisted therapy I think, but I honestly don't mind if you can't read/review. But thanks for reviewing so far =)
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/05 - 08:56AM
Title: Part Two
the more i hate justin, the more im loving the story.
i love joey for being nice to her. he's my hero.
Author's Response: He's mine too! He was so adorable in that chapter, with trying to include Sarah and stuff...but he's not going to be there for her defense in the next chapter, so...anyway, thanks for reviewing
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