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Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 03/30/05 - 05:26PM
Title: Part One
Oh my fuckin' goodness. I'm so angry right now. Sarah needs to cut Justin's bitch ass for putting his hands on her. Especially while she's pregnant. That's so depressing. Here I am reading some romance in the beginning and then I continue downward and realize that shit was nothing but a dream. *sigh* You better fix this! LOL. Update soon.
Author's Response: LOL Yup, that first part was just to put everyone in a good mood, until...bam! lol Justin is just a bastard, and if Sarah doesn't sort him out, someone should! I might fix things, i might not...you'll see ;) Thanks for the review
Reviewer: Gena
Anonymous
Date: 03/30/05 - 05:20PM
Title: Part One
Wow. That was both incredibly great and incredibly sad at the same time. You have a way with words woman! lol. Confidence boost at it's best!
Author's Response: LOL Thank you so much! See, you have a way with words too, because I just felt incredibly flattered! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/30/05 - 05:17PM
Title: Part One
And here I thought I was going to be your first. But seriously though this sound as if it's going to be a really great story. Shame on him for beating her while she's pregnant!
Author's Response: How does that rhyme go? First the worst, second the best...lmao! I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and shame on him for beating her in the first place! Thanks for the review =)
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 03/30/05 - 05:13PM
Title: Part One
Oh my gosh.
Well, lucky me...I guess I'm your first review?
That was so beautifuly and eloquently written and oh so sad. I know I'm a big dork, but I pay really close attention to vocabulary and the way things are worded--and some of your sentences were just great, if that makes any sense. lmao...
Gah! :( This has me all sad now though. I should be doing home work, but I saw that you wrote something new & I had to check it out cus I love your stuff.
Is this a chapter story or just a short? :/ Sigh.
Author's Response: Yup, first reviewer! It's probably going to have a second part to it, but it's not a long story. I could never carry something this depressing for that long! I'm so glad I could tear ya away from your homework...lol but thank you so much for reviewing. It's obviously very different from what I've done before, so it means a lot!
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