Reviewer: Steph
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 07:10PM
Title: Chapter Two
Awe poor Justin! This one is good. Keep updating please!
Author's Response: Don't worry, things will get better for him:) Updates coming soon!
Reviewer: Jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/05 - 06:32PM
Title: Chapter One
really good i like it!
Author's Response: thanks - glad you like it!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/05 - 05:32PM
Title: Chapter One
Great so far... but... (don't you hate the word 'but'? *lol*)
There's this one sentence needs fixing...
"He had cried ten years ago when his parents had made him share a room with his newborn sister. Over the years he had grown used to it, and also used to being responsible for his now eight-year-old sister."
It's a bit weird if she was a newborn 10 years ago but is now 8 :o)
But yeah, other than that, I'm really intrigued so far so more soon please!!
Author's Response: oops! hehe Thanks, I'll fix it!
