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Reviewer: Vanessa
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/05 - 11:46PM
Title: 3
AWW! too cute! that be a great movie ending
Reviewer: Leeann
Signed
Date: 06/30/05 - 12:25PM
Title: 3
aww that was good
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 06/29/05 - 05:49AM
Title: 3
That was so good, I loved this story. I am happy they are a couple.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/05 - 10:59AM
Title: 1
Wait, wait, wait...I forgot what I had planned on saying. All I hear in my head is Sponge Bob pillow. *lol* Anyway, I liked it.
Reviewer: Leeann
Signed
Date: 05/23/05 - 11:10PM
Title: 2
the first chapter was a little choppy, which considering you were thinking about that being the only chapter i can understand why the second chapter was good. cant wait for more. :)
Reviewer: Ashlie
Anonymous
Date: 05/23/05 - 10:01PM
Title: 2
I really like this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!!
Reviewer: Mandie
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/05 - 10:48AM
Title: 1
Awww thats a good start! I hope you are going to be adding on to it though!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 09:01PM
Title: 1
LOVED the ending.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 08:51PM
Title: 1
I liked it just the way it is.
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 08:44PM
Title: 1
I agree. It was a good start. Maybe you can make that the prologue and then elaborate more in other chapters?? Just a suggestion, but I think you should continue.
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