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Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/16/05 - 08:05AM
Title: chapter 6
Well, that was amazing. I was feeling it my damn self, LOL. Wow. I must say, Ashlynn's a lady in the street, but a freak in the bed! LOL. She is just like me! LOL Just kidding, damn!, lol. But that was hot and for Justin to be the main man in that scene was just too much for little ol' me to handle. I loved it. Update soon because I'm one of those impatient readers, LOL.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/13/05 - 12:16PM
Title: chapter 5
Wow. I'm loving the vibe between these two. Ashlynn and Justin sitting in a tree. . . Well, floating in a pool, lol. Anyway, that was extremely cute and I cannot wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: I was quite impressed with myself after I wrote that scene, If I do say so myself :). Thank you so much for reading this, it means a lot to me.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/13/05 - 07:42AM
Title: chapter 5
So near and yet so far... its kinda sweet that they're taking it slow though, very romantic. Not sure about Maggie though, why does she have to swish her arse around Justin? Anyways, another great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I'm not sure about Maggie either, there might be trouble brewing somewhere :). Anyway, I hope you like the next chapter.
Reviewer: nini22
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 08:54PM
Title: chapter 5
I was stimulated but with my mind lol
Please update this is getting good and hot
Author's Response: They'll hook up in good time, you'll see. Thank you for the review :)
Reviewer: MeMyself
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 08:27PM
Title: chapter 5
Hotness! That was hot :D I'm glad they finally got together :D Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'll try and update as soon as I can!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 07:45PM
Title: chapter 5
I'm disappointed, yet satisfied. Even though they didn't do "tha do" it was still steamy.
Author's Response: you guys are so impatient! they'll hook up soon enough, don't worry! :)
Reviewer: lil jb
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 07:14PM
Title: chapter 5
aw man i thought they were gonna do the nookie but...damn that was hot.
Author's Response: it's coming, don't worry... :)
Reviewer: Wh|tney
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/05 - 01:38PM
Title: chapter 4
dang, adorable lil 'friends' they are forming into.
would u post in my yahoo group? nsync-fanficcentral
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/05 - 03:23AM
Title: chapter 3
My favorite scene has to be where he was helping take the groceries out of the trunk.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/05 - 01:19AM
Title: chapter 4
What Timberlake said. Lmao "sookie, sookie."
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