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Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 09:05PM
Title: chapter 2
Nice....
Reviewer: MeMyself
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 08:48PM
Title: chapter 2
Hotness! I liked that part about how he explained he had jungle fever! lol I WISH! lol Great chapter, update soon please!
Reviewer: Vincenza
Signed
Date: 04/08/05 - 08:38PM
Title: chapter 2
That was kinda hot...okay, really hot. Write more soon!
Reviewer: lil jb
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 08:23PM
Title: chapter 2
boo yah!!!!! that was good man. so update really soon!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 08:12PM
Title: chapter 2
More soon!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 02:00PM
Title: chapter 1
This is a message for Nique you are so right about that girl.
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 12:06PM
Title: chapter 1
Oh i'm lovin this I can't wait for more and every shy person has a freak inside them I should cause i'm one and i love those pink lips myself .I hope he can bring her out of her shyness and I have a friend like that too. can't wait to read more
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 04/08/05 - 09:58AM
Title: chapter 1
i am really diggin' this story so far...i am loving the description of the characters!!!! Great job and update soon!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 08:38AM
Title: chapter 1
Timberlake lol, but yeah I can see why you'd want to read that again. If only just for the bit where he takes his shirt off. Very well written, good amount of description and you set up the relationships between the characters well. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/05 - 08:36AM
Title: chapter 1
I read that again, LOL. It's so good, man! Who the hell is Tony? LOL
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