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Reviewer: Ash
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 11:40PM
Title: chapter 6
Okay, that just made me way hotter than I need to be at almost 2:00 in the morning! LOL! But oh my damn. That was one of the best fucks I've never had LOL. Seriously, can I be Ashlynn for like a day or two? Better yet, an hour or two? Not only does he take care of her, but the man put it on her ass like a motherfu... yeah lol. He is on top of his shit, I must say. I commend him. And I commend you for this awesome story. On that hot ass note, I think I'm gonna call it a night, but once again, I WILL be back! And I must say again, I'm SO glad I finally got started on this! 'Til next time...
Reviewer: Ash
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 11:25PM
Title: chapter 5
Ah, what a tease! But I'm actually lovin' the fact that they didn't have sex. Yet. Shows that they're onto somethin' more than mindless physicall attraction. Hopefully, anyway lol. They're such a cute little duo, I can't even imagine how they could ever have any problems. And yet, I look forward to any drama that's a-brewin' LOL. As well as anymore pool scenes!
Reviewer: Ash
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 11:11PM
Title: chapter 4
Crap, forgot to log in. Oh well, it's me again lol. I just gotta say ''Let's Stay Together'' is definitely one of my favoritest songs of all time, so that made me squeal like an idiot. LOL. I'm lovin' what they're gettin' into here. They got me grinnin' like this is happening to me! Ah, the beginning is always the best part. *Sigh*
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 08/11/05 - 06:21PM
Title: chapter 3
Ahhh, what I wouldn't give to be Ashlynn in that chapter. Justin Timberlake pressing me up against a car? Please. It feels like somethin's heatin' up. Loves it! Unfortunately and ironically, it's my turn to go to the grocery store so I guess my reading will have to go on hold for a while. BUT, I'll be back! Awesomeness so far, Brittany!
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 08/11/05 - 06:10PM
Title: chapter 2
Okay, him explaining why he liked black women just gave me this tingly feeling inside. What an awesome fuckin' compliment! I used to get that way about the real Justin until I figured out he was lyin' LOL. I kid, I kid. No but seriously, that was THE perfect way to get him on my good side. He could fuck up incomprehensibly in this story and I'd just go think of that and that'd make it all better LOL! I guess I'll let him and Junior get back to business while I move it right along lol.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 08/11/05 - 06:02PM
Title: chapter 1
Oh and also, the whole beginning where Ashlynn was describing her trampy neighbors reminded me of Desperate Housewives and how everyone was so damn in love with Mike Delfino when he came into town. I know that's random and pointless to say, but it made me laugh lol. That is all. LOL.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 08/11/05 - 06:00PM
Title: chapter 1
Yes, definitely lovin' the beginning. I think I've come to love AU stories more than anything because it's a real challenge to the imagination -- new slate and everything. So far, so awesome. I love the description, I love the way you've begun to form relationships through dialogue, I love Justin with no shirt on LOL. I think that Olivia is gonna give me a nice little chuckle throughout this story, by the way. She reminds me of one of my best friends -- gorgeous, blonde hair/blue eyes and crazy/outspoken. Ah, what a combination lol. Anyway, I'm rambling. What I'm tryin' to say is I'm lovin' it already. And on a random note, when I was like 17, I swore up and down I was gonna name my first child Ashlynn LOL. Don't know what happened to that, but yeah... I'm glad I finally took the time to sit down and read this cuz it's pretty damn awesome! Moving right along...
Reviewer: Kitty
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/05 - 08:33PM
Title: chapter 13
I never thought this would all happen but i love the drama. Justin's soo stupid I'm hoping they'll work everything out. Updste soon xxx
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/05 - 09:13PM
Title: chapter 13
I think maybe they need a little time apart you know. Maybe they could both go to counseling and then talk things out.
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/05 - 04:50PM
Title: chapter 13
Okay fisrt off I love your story very nice . Now it's sad that they like this and justin need to realize hat if she hadn't shot Tony he would be dead instead . To reat her cold like that maybe he didn't really love her i hope he get together cause she got to thinking about a life she took even if he was horrible and justin being an ass to her ain't right now he sorry . I hope they get it right
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