Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 04/11/05 - 08:08AM
Title: Prologue
I only have time to read the prologue, but I'll check out the rest later. I really like it so far, though, and can't wait to read on! Well done!
Author's Response: thank ya thank ya :-D don't worry more is coming soon ;)
Author's Response: OH and Teeny I forgot to mention I read the sequal to Crossing Paths..amazingg just as the first looking forward to an update whenever you get the chance girl ;)
Reviewer: Su-Elise
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/05 - 04:40AM
Title: Prologue
I really like the beginning of this, I've only just started, but I can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: yay! I'm so glad u like it =)
Reviewer: jelli
Anonymous
Date: 04/10/05 - 08:13PM
Title: And the Grammy goes to...
The idea sounds interesting, but it's hard to read. Maybe you could break up the paragraphs, it's hard to follow who's talking. It would be easier if there were different lines and spaces between when someone else starts talking. But the story looks interesting.
Author's Response: Hey Jelli thanks for the suggestions! I fixed it and hopefully it'll be easier to read, I intended on fixing it but I was in a bit of a rush when I posted it in the first place, but hopefully now it'll be much easier to read for u all =)
