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Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/04 - 06:13PM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
This has nothing to do with what Denton thinks. He's not Dani and Justin, he doesn't know as much shit as he thinks. I'd be really hurt by the things he said, if he was tellin that stuff to me. She got one last chance to say she wants to be with Justin and if she hasn't then she's the dumbest person on earth. He loves her and would dump Cameron for her if she asked but she's stubborn & won't.
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/04 - 04:04PM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Come on! Dani needs to get her stuff together and get wit Justin.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/04 - 10:06AM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Wow, that was some deep crap. Loved it as always, but I want more. Update soon. Thanks! J&B!
Reviewer: Vi
Anonymous
Date: 10/14/04 - 04:46PM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Have been reading, I hope you would update this story soon.! Dont leave me hanging!! Lol. Great Story!!!!
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 10/12/04 - 02:26PM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
She needs to get off whatever it is she's on and get her man. I'm not sayin she needs to go out and fight Cameron just that she needs to tell the truth.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/12/04 - 02:05PM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
After all this, she better say yes. I've been on pins and needles. Nice job. Please update soon. Thanks! J&B!
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 10/12/04 - 12:04PM
Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
She needs to say yes, and they need to get together! great job. more soon!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 09/23/04 - 03:10PM
Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Nice job. Update soon. Thanks! J&B!
Reviewer: MissPinky
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/04 - 04:12PM
Title: Chapter Twenty Five
ok...now im a total devoted justin fan...but i have to say that i fell in love with "M". The way you perceived him in this story just takes my breath away..and to tell u the truth...in this story justin doesnt make my heart flutter all that much..and DAMN DANI...she is boncing back and forth and keeping both guys a secret from eachother..i wonder how M would react to dani sleeping with justin...hmmmm intresting..keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback, i'm glad you like the way i've written Eminem so far, i'm trying to make his character into a more rounded person instead of just a 'bad boy', so i'm really happy you caught onto that!
Reviewer: kaleena
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/04 - 09:22PM
Title: Chapter Twenty Five
i don't think i need to tell you how i feel about dani at this point....ahh!!! this is starting to get interesting, i sense some feelings coming into play! can't wait for more!!
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