Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 07/08/06 - 02:51PM
Title: My Decision
I think I'm gonna have to start hating you in a little while, Mari. I can't pinpoint exactly when you got soooo damn good at this, but I can't tell you how proud I am of you! You have a true gift with words, with creativity, with creating characters that we just can't get enough of and I adore you for it, girl. Alonsha and Justin have such a huge corner of my heart saved for their neverending drama that's it's hard to believe these fools aren't actually real. But then, I guess that's what's so beautiful about the imagination. I can't thank you enough for letting all of us in on what that brain of yours can do. Yet another brilliant story for the record books, mama. I'm so glad they FINALLY ended up together. I don't know why it takes so long for all of our characters to eventually realize that love conquers all, but it's amazing how we all breathe a collective sigh of relief when they finally get the message we've been screaming at them for 20 chapters LOL. I loved every. freakin'. word.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 07/08/06 - 02:36PM
Title: I’m Not Scared
This better be who I think it is, or I'm seriously gonna come hunt your candy ass down. You hear me?
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 07/08/06 - 02:24PM
Title: Worn Down
Geeez, finally! I really liked their breakup, though. Is that weird? Well whatever, I'm weird, so it's okay lmao. Very honest scene right there. Good writin' on this whooooole chapter, mama.
Reviewer: TeenySignedDate: 07/05/06 - 05:39PM
Title: My Decision
I of course would be three months late reviewing...beautiful story sweetie, I couldn't have imagine a better, more romantic (nor a little bit nasty...but that part was left to my imagination lol) ending for Alonsha and Justin. Truly a great story, made me laugh, made my stomach do flipflops (I was like...Come on, Justin, spit it out, I'm nervous waitin' over here!!) and it's all because of your great writing--you are awesomeness personified =)
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/30/06 - 03:24PM
Title: All Falls Down
Yeah, I'm gonna need them to grow up and stop acting like feuding bitches in high school. Cameron's crazy ass needs to recognize that slapping people isn't the way to get what you want, and Alonsha, a professional that works with kids, of all things, just needs to be a bigger person and walk away from certain things. That would've gone so much better (in her favor) if she'd taken the slap like a grown woman and pranced out there to tell Justin the truth instead of blurting out randomness when there's blood on her hands. And the floor. *sigh*
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/30/06 - 03:13PM
Title: All Falls Down
Tiff speaks the truth. I literally said this "Waste of three years thing" like 4 minutes ago!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/30/06 - 03:08PM
Title: Tell Him
Ummm, I think I officially hate Alonsha. Again. She's like a freakin' crack ho in denial. I thought her disappearance to Rhode Island was supposed to give her some confidence, or at the very least, some effin' common sense. So, on top of the fact that she abandoned him for a million years, let him move on just to have him fall back in love with her, but she's also desperately in love with him, too, and it was all for nothing. Okay, maybe she got the strength to stop drinking, but she clearly didn 't learn to apply that diligence and discipline to everyday life. What was it all for!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/30/06 - 02:55PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
*SIGH* I don't know who needs more of a slap -- Alonsha or Cameron. I mean, you can easily chalk up Cameron's behavior to being the Dumbaz that she is and it's kind of expected, but Alonsha Claire Daniels, what in God's name are you thinking?! Justin's supposedly the man you love and you're gonna let him go on, gushing about a baby that doesn't exist? Letting him think he has a booty is one thing, but letting him think he has a baby when he doesn't? *Bitch-slap* These are two toooootally different situations going here and the only reason Cameron can blackmail you with your lack of a problem is because you're letting her. Grow a pair, tell Justin yourself, and let him know his lying wench of a bitch is not only not pregnant, but not exactly sane, either. Ugh.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/30/06 - 02:35PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
LMFAO. An elongated back. ROFL! Girl, you are too funny. *Goes back to reading*
Lawdhammercy, why can't any of these fools do right or get right? If it ain't one thing it's another. I can't say I didn't feel sorry for Dumbaz though, cuz you know she knew that was the only thing left that tied her to Justin. She's kind of pretty much basically screwed now.
