Reviews For Love & Forgiveness
Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 06/30/06 - 08:56AM Title: What Have I Done?

Poor child.  It's like she's always taking one step forward and two steps back.  End the madness!


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 06/30/06 - 08:45AM Title: Caramel

Big AWWWWW.  Those were the makings of an extremely cute chapter. . . up until the end of course, but I think we know that you have a habit of shaking things up, so that was no surprise.  I loved EVERY. SINGLE. MOMENT.  until he left.  And I seriously squealed when they went to Geno's, and for some reason, I had it in my head that Alonsha was from Philadelphia and I'm like Why doesn't she know how to order?  And then it struck me that it's not Lonnie, but you, Miss Mari, that's from Philly and I instantly got unconfused.  Isn't it funny how things like that happen?  Just thought I'd share lol.


Reviewer: Ash Anonymous Date: 06/30/06 - 08:34AM Title: Cameron-Free

LMAO.  My favorite part, by far, was Justin gettin' bitch-slapped.  He deserves it for allowing this triangle to continue for no real reason except being too punkish to do anything about it.  He reminds me so much of Ethan (yes, from Passions) that it's kinda scary.  I love how he used domestic violence as a reason to go running back to Alonsha when he easily could've used it as a reason to just end the whole thing with Cameron in one fell swoop.  Ugh.  Men.  Why are they so stoopid?


Reviewer: Kasey Anonymous Date: 06/26/06 - 07:38PM Title: My Decision

OK yeah,.. from start to finish... LOVED IT! lol great job! GREAT JOB. = )


Reviewer: Leeann Anonymous Date: 05/15/06 - 11:45AM Title: My Decision

that m'dear was a damn good story.


Reviewer: Leeann Anonymous Date: 05/15/06 - 10:37AM Title: Sushi And Soulfood

dunno why he just doesnt dump her already lol.


Reviewer: Leeann Anonymous Date: 05/15/06 - 10:33AM Title: Truths And Lies

im not sure who pisses me off more justin or cameron lol. <3


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 04/11/06 - 09:23PM Title: My Decision

Aww. You know I would have kicked your ass if Alonsha and Justin didn't end up together. Thank God he got away from that pregnant faking cow aka Cameron. rofl. ;) They are so freakin' cute together. Yay for get back together sex. (Great shit.) rofl! ;)


Reviewer: nene22 Anonymous Date: 04/04/06 - 09:03PM Title: My Decision

I'm so happy and sad at the same time this is ending too soon. I loved this last chapter, is there more to come ??? LOL


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 04/03/06 - 06:39PM Title: My Decision

I absolutly loved it (Wiping my teary eyes) But i'm sooo sad it's over. Justin and Alonsha make such a beautiful couple and the ending was so sweet (I want to use a better word but my mind is all ugh; because i'm happy but sad). I'm so glad i read this story because it truly was worth the time. Thanks for being an excellent author! xxx





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