Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 06/30/06 - 08:56AM
Title: What Have I Done?
Poor child. It's like she's always taking one step forward and two steps back. End the madness!
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 06/30/06 - 08:45AM
Title: Caramel
Big AWWWWW. Those were the makings of an extremely cute chapter. . . up until the end of course, but I think we know that you have a habit of shaking things up, so that was no surprise. I loved EVERY. SINGLE. MOMENT. until he left. And I seriously squealed when they went to Geno's, and for some reason, I had it in my head that Alonsha was from Philadelphia and I'm like Why doesn't she know how to order? And then it struck me that it's not Lonnie, but you, Miss Mari, that's from Philly and I instantly got unconfused. Isn't it funny how things like that happen? Just thought I'd share lol.
Reviewer: Ash
Anonymous
Date: 06/30/06 - 08:34AM
Title: Cameron-Free
LMAO. My favorite part, by far, was Justin gettin' bitch-slapped. He deserves it for allowing this triangle to continue for no real reason except being too punkish to do anything about it. He reminds me so much of Ethan (yes, from Passions) that it's kinda scary. I love how he used domestic violence as a reason to go running back to Alonsha when he easily could've used it as a reason to just end the whole thing with Cameron in one fell swoop. Ugh. Men. Why are they so stoopid?
Reviewer: Kasey
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/06 - 07:38PM
Title: My Decision
OK yeah,.. from start to finish... LOVED IT! lol great job! GREAT JOB. = )
Reviewer: Leeann
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/06 - 11:45AM
Title: My Decision
that m'dear was a damn good story.
Reviewer: Leeann
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/06 - 10:37AM
Title: Sushi And Soulfood
dunno why he just doesnt dump her already lol.
Reviewer: Leeann
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/06 - 10:33AM
Title: Truths And Lies
im not sure who pisses me off more justin or cameron lol. <3
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 04/11/06 - 09:23PM
Title: My Decision
Aww. You know I would have kicked your ass if Alonsha and Justin didn't end up together. Thank God he got away from that pregnant faking cow aka Cameron. rofl. ;) They are so freakin' cute together. Yay for get back together sex. (Great shit.) rofl! ;)
Reviewer: nene22
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/06 - 09:03PM
Title: My Decision
I'm so happy and sad at the same time this is ending too soon. I loved this last chapter, is there more to come ??? LOL
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/06 - 06:39PM
Title: My Decision
I absolutly loved it (Wiping my teary eyes) But i'm sooo sad it's over. Justin and Alonsha make such a beautiful couple and the ending was so sweet (I want to use a better word but my mind is all ugh; because i'm happy but sad). I'm so glad i read this story because it truly was worth the time. Thanks for being an excellent author! xxx
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