Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 01:12AM
Title: Deal With The Devil
Gah! wtf is she doing! I would think those yrs ago that she left Justin, she would've at least gained some intelligence. Nope, still a dumbass. Geez, she's like the one girl that Justin trusts and loves with all his heart, and she's going to make a deal with some bitch that she hates just because she ashamed to let him know her real feelings? I don't know who's the bigger idiot, Cameron or Lonnie. And first of all, she wrote the letter to tell him how she felt, not to break you two up you dumb wench. ugh! It's amazing how into this story I can get girl! lmao. Shit, after reading this chapter, I want Justin to leave both of the wenches alone and go find someone new. He's too smart for them! Girl, hurry up with the next chapter ya hear? That just made my Christmas! Excellent chapter! *kisses*
Reviewer: deebee73
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 11:56PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
This is going to blow up in Alonsha's face big time. Justin is going to be ten times more pissed knowing that she helped Cameron cover up her non pregnancy, than he would be about finding out that Alonsha was in love with him. What is that girl thinking? This is going to be real ugly. Great Update.
P.S. I like the chapter title. Cam is definitely a blue eyed devil.
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 09:44PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
AUG!!! Carmeron is a total skank!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 12/17/05 - 09:31PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
Evil lying bitch! I don't see how she can even begin to claim that her preggo lie is the same as Lonnie not telling Justin that she really does have feelings for him. 'Sike, I'm not pregnant. April fools.' vs. 'Sike, I'm in love with you and I can't be just friends anymore.' Hmmm, yeah, verdict is in...and Cam's lying whoreness is WAY worse. And even if Justin would find a way to be mad about Lon for not telling him that she still has feelings for him, he's sure as hell going to be mad when he finds out that not only did she find out that Cam is babyless...but then she also turned around and helped her to continue to lie to him, which in that case will make her lies worse. *sighs* This is the first chapter I read of this story and I don't know the exact relationship between Lon and Justin, but I just see this turning out so much more worse for her than it needs to be, if she would only just tell him the truth. Well, I guess I should go back and read all those other chapter, huh? lol Great chapter, update soon!
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 07:59PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
Lonnie should tell it. He will be so mad at her when finds out she knew. I hope she realize he needs to know and tells him. Great update.
Reviewer: vessy
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 04:32PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
great update, it makes things more complicated what means the story won't end anytime soon :) update soon
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 04:30PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
Tell him you idiot! Geez woman, where is your brain? HE. LOVES. YOU. No matter what he tells himself and everyone else. grr.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 04:08PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
GODDAMNIT! AHH! STUPID LONNIE! She should have just told Justin. So what if he reads the letter. It's gonna be SO MESSY when he finds out that Lonnie knew, and that she DIDN'T tell him. BLAH.
Update soon.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 03:32PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
OH MAN!!! I feel so sorry for Alonsha this just might drive the poor girl to drink again.
Reviewer: Amber - Jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 01:05PM
Title: Deal With The Devil
Awesome update girl!!! i love it... an Cameron really needs to fess up an tell j.. same with lonnie!! An i agree with Nicole.. I hate CAMERON!! update soon
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