Reviewer: Ash
Anonymous
Date: 09/08/05 - 06:39PM
Title: The Wrong Right
I hate you.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 09/08/05 - 06:37PM
Title: The Wrong Right
I hate you.
Reviewer: jessica
Anonymous
Date: 09/08/05 - 06:28PM
Title: The Wrong Right
WHAT IN GOD'S NAME IS FUCKING WRONG WITH YOU, MARY J? You must be smokin' blunts like I thought, because I know I didn't just find out that the Cow is knocked up and now Justin is gonna ask her to fucking MARRY him? MARRY HIS ASS? Omg, No. And stupid bitch Alonsha approves. NO. I quit. I'm not reading this shit anymore. Especially with the whole after-sex scene you threw in there with Justin and the cow. You think my fucking eyes liked that shit? YOU THINK THEY DID? Well, guess again SLUT. I'm done. I'm done with this shit. ROFL. I can't handle this anymore. My heart beat is picking up. There's too much damn---oh god, I need to be alone. Goodbye. I'm sure Ash will be happy about the damn cow, cus I let her know...oops, my BAD. *vomit*
Reviewer: meg
Anonymous
Date: 09/02/05 - 11:10AM
Title: Sushi And Soulfood
ok don't get me wrong when i say this and know that i'm loving this story but cameron is just a big baby....literary...she acts like a oversized kid....other then that i love it!!! hurry up with the next chapter already!!! i don't know how long i can stand not knowing how long it will take jay and lonnie to get back together....its killing me already!!!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/05 - 09:28PM
Title: Home Sweet Home
omgosh. I HAVE ash calling cameron a cow. loves it. *snort*
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 08/21/05 - 01:08PM
Title: Sushi And Soulfood
"Why Slyvia's? Alonsha's open twenty-four hours a day." Oh, shit -- that's the best line Cameron's had in the story! ROFL! Hilarious. By the way, I LOVE Sylvia's. *Sigh* I'm jealous of Cameron just cuz she gets to be in New York LOL. And okay, what the hell is wrong with Alonsha? I don't care how cool they are -- you do not help plan any damn gifts for Cameron the Cow. WTF! I mean, no wonder she's still pining away for him. Speak up, bitch! Shit, I wish I would help my ex give or get anything to or from his current girlfriend. Especially if I hated her guts. I'm sorry, but I'm just not that selfless. Or insane. Alonsha, I have one request: OPEN YOUR DAMN MOUTH. Justin's too stupid to know the real deal unless you spell it out for him in capital letters painted in lime green and decorated with flashing lights. Geez, get it together, girl. And yeah, I'm still laughing at Cameron's comment. LOL. Great updates, homie.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 08/21/05 - 12:49PM
Title: Truths And Lies
Oh, Alonsha. You're supposed to be the cool one. Cameron's the one that goes on psycho rants and blurts out untrue things immaturely. Oh, Alonsha. WHY, ALONSHA? If she coulda just kept her cool, Justin might've broken up with tho before the damn night was even over! But now, she's done the unspeakable and pushed him even further to Cameron's side, at Cameron's mercy because now he's the one that fucked up. His sympathy is gonna keep him with her for at least another month! Oh, Alonsha. *Sigh* I don't even know what I want from these people anymore. Just happiness. Just honesty. Just anything else that starts with an H that makes sense here LOL. Crazy bastards. Excellent update, doll!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/05 - 10:22AM
Title: Sushi And Soulfood
Dammit!! Cameron's love does NOT deserve another chance!! He should throw that bitch aside and have sex with Alonsha!! Ugh, Mari, why are you doing this to me?! Make them have sex, please!!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/05 - 05:02AM
Title: Sushi And Soulfood
Justin and Alonsha should really have sex. And then get back together and stuff. And then more sex. Great update!
Reviewer: title..valentines day sucks!!!
Anonymous
Date: 08/19/05 - 11:25PM
Title: Sushi And Soulfood
loved this chapter, was simple yet got the point across that they cant run away from thier feelings..awesome job..update soon please!!!
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