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Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 12:21AM
Title: Truths And Lies
I haven't read all of it yet but I recognized Keyshia Cole! I LOVE HER AND I LOVE YOU! Hehehehe. I love her album. :D Okay off to read now!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 10:52PM
Title: Truths And Lies
Oh and now the bastard is gonna be mad at Alonsha cus of what she did. I mean, yeah...it was wrong..but because of the cow. .......it's the cow we're talking about here. THE COW!!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 10:50PM
Title: Truths And Lies
Ugh. I'm really sick and I'm fixing to go lay down and never return forever, but I felt the need to just read this and say my piece. I mean, WHAT the FUCK? Cameron is a fucking idiot. She actually believes Justin--and even worse, Justin is a lying ass piece of shit. Honestly, I hate his ass. The bastard needs to grow some balls and just dump the cow once and for all. This isn't some "rough patch" this is a fucking, "piece of shit relationship gone wrong for far too long that needs to fucking END NOW". Ahem. I'm sick, did I mention? =( Sick to death of CAMERON....cow. What else is there to say? Um...I don't even know. I'm going to bed for now, though. Good update, Mary J. Even though I can't stand the cow and I don't understand why, it's chapter 24, and the cow is still here?
Reviewer: Mattison30
Signed
Date: 08/12/05 - 10:50PM
Title: Truths And Lies
Oh that was so not a smart move on Alonsha's part. No matter how much little Miss. Diaz deserved to hear that so that she would feel like crap it was just plain wrong of Alonsha to tell her. Justin told her that in confidence that she would keep her mouth shut. If Cameron had to find out that stuff she should have heard it from Justin. Now Justin is just going to get all mad at Alonsha for like the millionth time and blah, blah, blah, drama, drama, and more drama. I don't know how much more of this I can take. I was reading this wishing that you had ended the first story differently and never had Alonsha leave Justin in the first place. They need to just suck it up and admit thier feeling for one another so that I can relax. *Takes a deep breath* Okay that's it for now. Just please don't make Justin stay mad at her for too long. He should be mad but not too mad. :) Thanks for the always awesome update. You're mad talanted and I get great pleasure out of reading your stories. LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewer: NikkI g.
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 09:36PM
Title: Truths And Lies
Okay, Cameron always starts crap, ALWAYS. Maybe homegirl didn't have to take it as far as she did, but she is definitely not to blame bc she is trying to stay out of their relationship but J can't help but bring her in the middle. What's gonna happen next? He's gonna get mad...please don't let him ask for another 'break' bc if he did, this time I wouldn't come back. Hey, she's movin' anyway and then he's gonna get mad&say she's running again. Why can't he realize that they are meant to be. Oh yeah bc he's scared she might break his heart again. Get over it and stop acting like a pussy. YEAH, I said it all. Please, please update soon cause I love the story. Thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 09:17PM
Title: Truths And Lies
To tell the truth I'm sick of everybody! I'm sick of Alonsha because she's all ways causing drama between Justin and Cameron. Not that I like them being together but it's just nerve-racking. I want them to break up just like everybody else but I don't want Alonsha to the cause of it. Because if she is Justin might resent her.
Reviewer: hiedi
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 08:42PM
Title: Truths And Lies
Great update! I hate waiting for the next chapter though! Keep 'em coming.
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 07:53PM
Title: Truths And Lies
This was a great update, I don't know why you think it's shitty. I just want Justin and Alonsha to get back together... ugh, I hate waiting!
Reviewer: deebee
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 07:32PM
Title: Truths And Lies
This update was great. I always love the playful conversations between Justin and Alonsha, they are just too cute together. Now this is what should happen next. Alonsha should just grab Justin and tongue him down and Cameron needs to run out into traffic and get hit by a really big truck. Think you can make that happen? Can't wait for more. ;)
Reviewer: hiedi
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 09:11PM
Title: Left To Wonder
Awesome chapter as usual! I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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