Reviews For Love & Forgiveness
Reviewer: Amber- Jrtluva05 Anonymous Date: 08/07/05 - 10:12PM Title: Left To Wonder

Awesome chapter hun can't wait for more!!!! please update!


Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Date: 08/04/05 - 12:03AM Title: Left To Wonder

I was having computer problems because this the first time i read it since then. The first thought i had was "Cameron is still here? damn." I want her gone. I know she's kind of right about how she's feel when there together but she has got to go. It's like i just get pissed off thinkin about her. I feel bad for alonsha even though its her fault for not stayin with him in the first place. she's just screwed but she's too damn nice to sabotage him and cameron w/o actin like she is. you know they were buddy buddy before if she could get to that it'd get to cameron.


Reviewer: Sondra Anonymous Date: 08/03/05 - 04:47PM Title: Left To Wonder

I miss them too! And I dunno about Alonsha, but I miss boyfriend Justin!! Why don't they just get it together and make out with each other furiously. You're killing me here Marianne! Get some sex in here quick! I'm just kidding lol. I'm loving this story more and more with each passing day. It just never gets boring! You're such an awesome writer and I'm SO jealous *blushes* Keep up the good work homegirl! And there better be another chapter next time I come back here or I'm coming for YOU. Yeah that's right! Go write NOW! lol. Love ya girl! Gimme some mo'!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 08/03/05 - 12:52PM Title: Left To Wonder

It was such an unsettling realization that the incredibly stupid and immature conversation between Justin and Alonsha is exactly the same as almost all the conversations between me and my smartest friends. Great LOL Anyway, I don't know what all this "smack" about Alonsha moving to Philly is all about, but I don't like it. Why don't they toss another staff member? Excuse me insensitivity but...y'know, whatever. And thank the LORD Alonsha's finally realizing hey, I'm hanging out with my gorgeous and sexiful ex here, why aren't we gettin' it on? It's only a matter of time before Justin follows suit. And lastly...Cameron gaining weight--she WISHES, LMAO


Reviewer: glitter15 Anonymous Date: 08/02/05 - 04:22PM Title: Excuses, Excuses

Ugh, I'm getting a headache. Why am I doing this to myself? The kiss was good. So what? He's a good kisser. It would've been good to anyone. It's a generalized good. . . Yeah. It's just a good, good. Like how a toasty comforter feels good to anyone during a cold night. It's a universal good. Like chocolate and ice cream. . . Or all that could just be another bullshit excuse I'm using to try and not admit that I might've enjoyed it a little too much. But I pulled away, damn it. Doesn't that count for something? OH GIRL is straight up TRIPPIN. Of course it don't count for shit. And kisses with Justin? Generalized? NOTHING can be general when it comes to that white piece of sexy ASS. ROFL. So um yeah, Alonsha? Kick Cam the cow to curve and get JT Back already! ahhahaa. Ahh, loves it. You're the shit Mary J. I love your stories so freakin' much--maybe not you all the time, but your stories, yes. LOL FOUR more golden stars for JESS. Holla back, bitch!


Reviewer: glitter15 Anonymous Date: 08/02/05 - 04:18PM Title: A Nice Change

"This isn't your fault, baby," she told him, "You were in a bad place and vulnerable. I can't hold that against you." OMG CAM IS SUCH A PUSSY. on top of being a cow and all. ROFL. I'm sorry I agree with almost everythign Ash said though. I do kinda feel sorry for the hoe in this chapter. I mean she's just a fuckin nut. Why can't she just let Justin go. She knows she can't compete. rofl.....


Reviewer: glitter15 Anonymous Date: 08/02/05 - 04:14PM Title: What, When, How, Why

AHHH. Okay, so I'm too lazy to comment on every chapter, but I had to do this one too. LOVES IT. LoL. Poor Justin, crying like a little pussy bitch and all. Hahaha. Omg I'm so mean...ROFL. I mean, of course it's sad, his granny died. =( It was so cute that Alonsha helped him through everything...and Cameron...omg, what else can I say but the usual, "Wow, what a fucking cow if there ever was one!" LOL. Oh and this line: "Me saying something nice about Cameron can make anybody sick." Now I don't know about ANYBODY sugah, but it sure as FUCK can make me feel damn right sick. ROFL. *Barfs* rofl. I better get a review reply for all my hard efforts here. Jessica gets a golden star. Naw, naw, make that four golden stars for Jess. Why? Cus Cameron's a fucking cow of course!! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL. Hahha. ANd once again, I fail to make sense. Kissing KISSSSSSING. OMg I Love kissing. Especially when it involves Justin and Alonsha WHEEE. Oh wait, he's a cheater. Oh wait, that's okay, ...he's in shambles. Ahh--ok...that's all. LOL


Reviewer: glitter15 Anonymous Date: 08/02/05 - 03:58PM Title: Left To Wonder

Ay Dios Mio--can Cameron EVER be gone? Cow. Rofl. Moving on, LOL. Sorry this review took so long honeyBun, but your girl Jess is slow and has got lots of demands in her life. Hahah. You still love me though. I loved this chapter! Justin tried to cook. How sweet. Although, I really didn't appreciate this line: "I decided to take a seat at the small kitchen table instead of standing behind Justin and watching him cook to the best of his abilities. I saw him pick up the blue package that once held the spagetti and read over it. I can't believe he needed directions to cook pasta. The boy was just sad." There is NO need for you hate on people who can't cook, okay? LOL. I read directions as well--and what's wrong with a man that can take a little direction? ROFL. *sings 'Ain't Nothing Wrong'....* Ahem. This is the second freakin' time I am reviewing, have you know. Last night this stupid piece of shit didn't even process. Talk about fucking ...shit. Ok...MOVIN' on again, ROFL. TIMBERLOVE, rofl. AHh, loves it......Um, Alonsha misses her boyfriend, and she's not going to Philly. What the fuck. You really like to drag this shit out, don't ya bitch? Talk about me and Chris being rude and into torture. My ass, bitch. I mean it's like chapter freaking 23, and STILL, Justin is with the cow. I'm sorry but couldn't that be considered like a freakin'....CRIME or something in some state? LOL. Oh, I think so. I agree with Ash--keep the cow outta the chapters, it makes me happy. hahaha. Well um, you are welcome for those nominations, since I love you and all. (Maybe I'll even vote if I'm feelin nice. rofl). Um....can the cowww...err...I mean Cameron leave the story? Sorry, good things come in three, so I figured if I bitched three times about it, it might do some good. LOL. Anyho, I'm getting sick of babbling on and I'm doped on my meds so I'm gonna just shut up now. Update soon, and I expect my shit done soon too...bitch. Grr..


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 08/02/05 - 02:38PM Title: Left To Wonder

Boyfriend. She misses boyfriend!!! Damnit! Grr.. So frustrated. Update. Soon.


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 08/02/05 - 11:39AM Title: Left To Wonder

At first I was thinking Alonsha should ask Justin his opinion on the Philly job offer. Now I don't think she should...I mean, you wouldn't ask a block, so why ask a block-head.





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