Reviewer: Shronda
AnonymousDate: 08/01/05 - 07:41PM
Title: Left To Wonder
love the chapter it felt like olds dayz when they were together all those was the dayz lol but seriously will you put them together already please it's driving me crazy. keep up the good work.
shronda
Reviewer: jo
AnonymousDate: 07/31/05 - 07:39PM
Title: Home Sweet Home
Holy fucken shit. Ok I got that out of my chest. What the fuck? OK, OK. You are such a tease. ;) Just showing up out of the blue? Ok, OK I'm gonna go read.
Reviewer: jo
AnonymousDate: 07/31/05 - 07:21PM
Title: Excuses, Excuses
OK I just finished reading Love and Trust and I just fast forwarded(is that a word) anyway I just HAD to see a glimpse of some sort of happiness. So I read the last line ok the last 3 lines of this chapter. Horrible of me I know, but now I'm going to the beginning to read how Justin coped with Lonnie leaving. Oh now I'm restless. I'll get back to you when I read everything. Your a great writer by the way. I've been reading since yesterday.
Reviewer: Ash
AnonymousDate: 07/30/05 - 02:52PM
Title: A Nice Change
Okay, I'm now lost. I kinda thought I was hating Cameron (or at least starting to), but no, I just can't help but feel sorry for the ho. If I were her, I'd be scared of losing my man, too. I can't imagine what it'd be like to walk into my boyfriend's childhood home, thinkin' that I'm coming there to be the support he didn't have all this time and then find his ex-slash-now-very-close-friend staring back at me. I'm really surprised she didn't go in for the kill right there. That shit would've just broken me down. So yeah, I commend Cameron for her composure. Even if it is blaringly suspicious LOL. It'd be verrrrry interesting if she and Alonsha became genuine friends. It'd make it that much harder for Alonsha to steal Justin back. But hey, all's fair in love and war. Or love and forgiveness. Same shit lol. Awesomeness, dahling. You are just consistently kickin' ass here. Oh! And LMFAO @ C-Unit. ROFL!
Reviewer: Helena
AnonymousDate: 07/30/05 - 12:45PM
Title: Excuses, Excuses
I DEMAND THEY MAKE OUT! NOOOOOOW! Justin and Alonsha 4eva damn it, but I guess he's happy... or something... Great update girl!
Author's Response: LMFAO! Helena, you horn dog, you!
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! Not again! Dude, you were right. I do hate you! But not really lol. I was crying so hard, I was hoping I was reading the shit wrong LOL. But thanks to your warning, I kinda prepared myself for that inevitability. But seriously, Justin's breakin' my heart here. I know Cameron's an annoying, psycho ass bitch, but all I want is for him to break up with her stupid ass. Don't cheat on her! I'm willing to forgive him now because he's suffering from the delirium of a broken heart. BUT, after this kiss, (and once he's successfully completed the road to recovery), I hope that the first thing he does is send Diaz packin'. Alonsha still isn't my favorite person in the world, but I'd be an idiot to think that they don't clearly belong together after all of this. Dumbaz being around would've made this entire ordeal 95962065 times worse for him, so I'm definitely glad that her difficult ass is off being stubborn as usual. I can't get over how engrossing this story is. You write with so much depth and honesty, girl. You amaze me. Keep up the inspiring work, doll! ;-)
Author's Response: LMFAO! OMG! You were crying? LMFAO! I am rollin' right now. My moms is shooting me looks, LMFAO! Oh goodness, like you said, he was suffering from a broken heart, so you can't hold it against him. I don't know what's going to happen afterward, but Cameron packing ain't happening, LOL! Ash, I'm still laughing about you crying, LMAO! You better be lying, LMFAO! That's hilarious, I'm sorry, LMAO! Okay, okay, I'm gonna sober up, lol. Thank you so much for being so into my story. It really means a lot coming from an author like yourself. Thanks for the review, sugar. They're always appreciated =)
I read all 22 chapters of this story in one sitting and I am loving it. Cameron is getting on my nerves to no end, but all the fault isn't hers. Justin just lets her pull his strings and he is so indecisive about his relationship with Alonsha. On a slightly unrelated note, thank you for talking about Justins raggedy beard. I thought I was the only one hating on that thing living on his face right now. At least fiction Justin had the good sense to shave it off, maybe real-life Justin will do the same LOL. Anyway I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, you did? Jesus pieces, child, LMAO! I'm so happy you loved it tho. I agree with you. Cameron wouldn't be so bad if Justin wouldn't allow her to control everything he does. He needs to make up his mind about Lonnie and stop stringing them both along. ROFL! I had to mention that damn rug on his face. That shit is just annoying, LMAO! Doesn't he know how sexy he is with that shit off his face? LMAO! Anyways, thank you very much for the review, sugar, lol.
Awww! Although this is amazingly heartbreaking, it's great to see Alonsha and Justin getting some one on one time together. It's like they took it back to the beginning when they were purely friends, which is when their relationship was probably the most genuine. There were no insecurities, no hiding, all honesty -- they were just cool. And I love seeing them back at that stage again. I guess all they needed was for Dumbaz to disappear for a while to get back where they needed to be. You're kickin' ass here, girl. Awesome chapter, as usual.
Author's Response: LMAO! Dumbaz left the building and all was well. Dumbaz enters the building, and Alonsha leaves, LOL! Maybe that's saying something, lol. I'm agreeing with you on the whole friendship thing. They were just themselves way back when they were buddies, then love came along and complicated that, LOL! But it was still a friendship based love, which made it cute, lol. Okay, I'm going to stop babbling about my characters, LMAO! Anyways, thanking so much for reading and reviewing, homes =)
hmmm what the hell does this girl got up her sleeve. she's snapped out of witchy stage and now she's trying to act like June Cleaver?! WHAT-EVER. And Lonnie, girrrrl...go try that kiss again. Mary Ann, you never cease to amaze me. Awesome chapter! Now update biotch!
Author's Response: LOL! Shame on you! Suggesting Alonsha kiss Justin again, LMAO! Just kidding, I like that idea tho, lol. Ya'll are bringing over to the darkside, LOL! Anyways, I wonder what she has up her sleeve too, lol. Hopefully, it's nothing major, lol. I'm glad I amaze you, sugar! Thank for that compliment as well as the review, hun =D
I agree with everything Teeny said. You know what I think, I think Cameron's gonna loose it pretty soon. Something's going to happen that'll make abandon her position as president of the "We heart Alonsha soooo much!!!" fan club. Mmm-hmm! Just wait and see. And stupid-ass idiota Justin. You're not falling in love with that flesh-covered twig again, it's just one of the stages of greiving! Jeez!
Author's Response: LMFAO! Flesh-covered twig???? LMAO! Goodness gracious, Niq, I agree with you, LOL! Will she lose it???? I don't know, I didn't write that far up yet, LMAO! But, if she does, what will that lead to? More drama and denial, that's what! LMAO! I love the sound of that tho. . .lol. Anyways, thanks for the review, sugar. It's always appreciated ;)
