Intense....intensely awesome! Haha Dang gurl so much drama in one chapter can make a person do something..Not sure what but dang! Pooooor J & A though..Screw C she's just plain dumb. Justin needs to call Alonsha so she can help him or something. I dunno just get them back together and make everyone happy again. And Cam doesn't need to jum p off the cliff...Just make her fall alseep behind the wheel of the car and then she goes of the cliff. Or have her plane crash in the Pacific on the way to Europe. *hint hint* Just get rid of her!! Terrific Job
Author's Response: LMFAO! No death, sugar. Cameron ain't crashing or driving off a cliff, LMAO. I feel bad for J & A, but what can I do? LOL! Everybody wants this "comfort" to occur, but I don't know about all that yet, lol. I do appreciate the suggestion, lol. Be patient, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar =)
Oh God, poor Alonsha, poor Justin...they just have no idea, do they? I think Alonsha blew up a little too much at Justin, because it wasn't as though he planned Cameron's arrival, but I'm sure she was just emotional because of Adam. But Justin is STILL being a pussy with Cameron, which makes me wanna slap him. I wish they could just get their shit together, dammit! lol I hope they make up, because Justin's gonna go through a tough time with the death of his nana, and I doubt Cameron will be much use. Anyway, congrats on the awards and lurvly update!
Author's Response: It's just all around sad, isn't it? Alonsha's boyfriend's gay, and Justin's being a pussy and breaking things up with her. Then Justin and Cameron fight, again. He ends up getting a call about his Nana dying. Damn, that is depressing, lol. What the hell was I thinking writing that? LOL! Anywho, Alonsha was a little harsh, but you're right, she was being emotional because of Adam. I know you want them together, Chris, but I can't give you that yet, LOL! More tortorous chapters, my dear, lol. Thanks for the congrats and thank you for the lovely review =)
Reviewer: Michelle
AnonymousDate: 06/25/05 - 09:28AM
Title: Home Sweet Home
Okay, they should both know by now that taking breaks and totally calling off the friendship in general is NOT going to work. They're going to end up back together as friends. But when are they going to wake up and realize that they belong together? Now I have that Mariah song stuck in my head....LOL. Update soon. This drama is killing me.
Author's Response: We all know the breaks and breaks up just don't work, but what can I say? The blind will see eventually, so we have to have patience my dear, lol. They'll be friends again, but as far as lovers, I can't give any guarantees, LOL! That is my song btw, LOL! The drama is killing you, huh? Just the way I like it, LMAO. Thanks for the review, sugar ;)
o my god i love ur story. i hope u won't end it very fast i like the whole up and down things in the story it makes it more interesting. congratulations 4 the awards well done !!
don't let us wait too long 4 the next chapter please !
Author's Response: Aw, Vessy! LOL! You're too sweet, hun. I honestly don't know when I'm ending this story, lol. Soon or in the near future are two options I have right now. I don't want to stop either, but it all depends on my imagination, I suppose, lol. Thanks for the congrats, dears. I appreciate it. Thank you for the review =)
i don't know why he has cameron for that ringer b/c she has no ass. not b/c i was looking or anything, it was in another chapter and maybe charlies angel. i would have told justin to fuck off, i wouldn't be runnin after him tryin to be his friend. he could talk to me after he gets his shit straight. this is just another time for me to say he's an ass and it probably won't be the last.
Author's Response: LMFAO! That was a very good burn, LMAO! Damn, so much anger, LOL! Yes, Justin is an ass, and yes, this probably won't be the last time you say that, LMAO. Alonsha shouldn't be chasing after him, but she can't help but care about his dumbass, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar =)
Reviewer: Ani
AnonymousDate: 06/24/05 - 11:36PM
Title: Free Yourself
He suddenly felt the vibrations of his cell against his leg. Eminem's 'Ass Like That' was muffled by his shirt as he unclipped his phone from his belt loop. He saw Cameron's name flash across the screen and he sighed before answering. Yeah, that had me laughing histerically. LOL. Justin had a sucky ass day, didn't he? Everything seems getting worse for the poor child. My heart literally stopped when Trace called crying about Nana. That's rough...Maybe cus of this, Justin will have an epiphany or some shit and realize that he has to live life to the fullest and be happy and then be like "I need to be with Alonsha." Ahh, I like my idea....but I'll probably like your idea better when the chapter comes. LOL Congratulations on the awards and keep doin' what you're doin' cus you're doin' a damn good job! :P
Author's Response: LOL, you could just feel his frustration, couldn't you? I didn't mean to make your heart stop, Ani, but I'm glad I got some emotion out of you, lol. Everybody seems to think Justin will have this new revelation since his Nana passed away, maybe you're right, maybe you're wrong, LOL! I like the idea tho, so I might give ya'll that, LOL! Thank you for the cogratulations, sugar. I'll try to keep doing what I'm doing, and hopefully improve as time passes. Thanks for reading and review, hun =)
Another great chapter, If justins day could not get any worser. I was happy to see lonnie and J connect over butter pecan but then "the bitch" had to come for a visit and ruin a good moment. Best thing of all my girl finally told justin to man up and stop being cameron's lap dog
Author's Response: LMAO! "The Bitch" ROFL. Yes, the ice cream connection was sweet while it lasted, but of course, all good things come to an end, lol. Lonnie did put his ass in check, but it only added to the stress Justin was having. I want to be mad at him too, but that's still my sugar, LMAO. Thanks for the review, hun =)
Reviewer: Meghan Carter
AnonymousDate: 06/24/05 - 08:59PM
Title: Free Yourself
That was a nice little update you posted.
{lol} Well as always you came, you saw, and you kicked a lot of ass with this chapter!!! I feel really bad about justin's nana, that kind of got to me but hey if a fan fic can make me laugh, angry and sad all at the same time than this is my kind of story {lol} can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Meghan. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, but I apologize for the nana thing, LMAO. I hate making people feel bad, lol. My chapter kicked ass???? OMG, LOL! Thank you, thank you, thank. As always, I appreciate the review, sugar =]
thats chapter was so sad..i feel really bad for justin and alonsha..and kill me but i think im startting to feel bad for cam..not bc ithink she should be with justin but because she has horrible timing lol..anyways fanatstic chapter as usual..update soon love
Author's Response: ROFL! Here I was, actually thinking you really felt bad for Cameron, LOL! Feeling bad for Justin and Alonsha is completely understandable. Especially Justin. Poor Nana. Thanks for the review, sugar :)
Reviewer: Nikki G.
AnonymousDate: 06/24/05 - 07:55PM
Title: Free Yourself
Woah. he just had a shitty day. i can relate bc i'm that close 2 my great grandma and if nething happened 2 her, i'd die. she's like my 2nd mom. Great chap. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: His day was pretty shitty. I'm glad that you can relate to this story, sugar. Grandparents seem to always have a close tie to their grandchildren, so you know Justin's hurting. Thanks for the review, sugar. It's appreciated =)
