Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 06/06/05 - 09:14PM
Title: Birthday Blues
Ok Cameron's little insecurities are getting on my nerves.
I totally agree. Still waiting on the Justin/Alonsha hook up... Anyway, great chapter once again.
Author's Response: LMAO! I don't know when the hook up will occur, but keep on reading, lol. Thansk for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 06/06/05 - 09:12PM
Title: Birthday Blues
Ok Cameron's little insecurities are getting on my nerves.
Author's Response: I must say, I do agree with you, Gigi. But are they justified???? LOL! Thanks for the review, hun.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/06/05 - 08:40PM
Title: Birthday Blues
Cam, I feel you, baby! Ahh, this is breakin' my heart. I got tears all up on my keyboard now and shit. Ugh, how dare you keep making me feel bad for this woman that I have a very deep dislike for in real life! I can't talk, because she has a very similar fate in Dirrty Laundry lol. But still, reading about it this way just tears me up, dude. Not only was he madly in love with his ex that left him high and dry while Cameron was there to stick it out with him, but he's falling right back in love with her all over again while she has to watch it. Marianne, you've once again done the unspeakable by making me cry with this ho. But it's just soooo good! Amazing relation of her emotions in the end, I must say. And that's a gorgeous graphic, by the way. So many beautiful people! Anywho, I'm all caught up now, so you can keep it comin', mama! (Oh, and Pssst. *whispers* I nominated ya again at the Cosmic Pop Awards because Get Lifted was simply AMAZING.) Love ya!
Author's Response: LMAO! CRY ME A RIVER, Ash, LMAO! Wow, was it really that sad? Maybe it's because I don't really care for her that much, lol. Whoa, same thing in Dirrty Laundry, huh? Well, damn, you're just giving your story away, LOL! I'll still be reading to the last line, babe. Well, sure Alonsha left him, but she was woman enough to own up to it and apologize. She also explained herself and whatnot, so she's excused, LMAO! I'm glad you enjoyed the blends, my dear. I was bored, so I did them, lol. Thanks for the nominations!!!!! LOL! I'm gonna win, but it's the thought that counts, LOL! You really thought it was amazing? Wow. That's a huge compliment. I appreciate that and I appreciate the review :)
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/06/05 - 08:06PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Yep, still feeling bad for Cameron. I shed another tear when she did after their hot sex in the kitchen lol. This is sad squared.
Author's Response: ROFL! OMFG! I thought that part was funny, LOL! Oh well, I'm evil like that, lol. Thanks for the other half of the review, homes!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/06/05 - 07:55PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Awww! Okay, I only got halfway through the chapter so far, but I just sat here crying for Cameron fucking Diaz. Do you know how sick that makes me? But seriously, as soon as I read about the candles being blown out and the freakin' one empty champagne glass, the tears started rollin'. It's heartbreaking to know that between Justin and Alonsha, the two of them have made her feel like utter crap. I can relate, man. And it's sad. Me seein' her fallin' for your charm got me feelin' like I wasn't good enough... So sad.
Author's Response: LOL! OMG! I love that song!!!! LOL! And it was sad, but I don't care for Diaz, so what can I say? LMFAO! She was all happy to get her romantic evening started, but it was a bust. So sad, lol. I didn't mean to make you cry, but I'm glad you got some emotion out of the chapter, lol. I'm so proud, LMAO! Thanks for the review, sweet pea ;)
I guess I'm the only one that feels bad for Cameron lol. She has to sit there and witness the love of her life gush and ogle over the love of his life. I mean, I don't really know what that feels like, but somethin' tells me it ain't nothin' nice. Especially after she attempted to open her arms and mind to Alonsha. But then, it's not like Alonsha did anything but be herself. Well, herself revamped, anyway. It's weird, cuz now I don't know whose side to be on. I figure, if Cameron does anything completely and unnecessarily crazy, I'll have a reason to hate her. But that's yet to happen, so I'm in her corner. Poor Dumbaz. *Gives her a hug through the 'puter screen.*
Author's Response: ROFL! 'puter screen! LMAO! I guess Cameron can be offered some sympathy because no woman should have to go through that shit. I wouldn't want my mind drooling over his ex, but like you said, Lonnie didn't do anything wrong. But Dumbaz is one crazy ass, so you never know what she'll do, LOL! Keep an eye out for her ;) Thanks for the review, hun. Loves ya!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/06/05 - 07:18PM
Title: The Things He Missed
Awww! I miss their races, too! Ugh. I think I'm liking Alonsha again. Dammit, I've been gone from this story for too long! My love for Cameron has subsided! Nonetheless, I'm gonna be truly upset if they cheat on their respective mates with one another. Sure, they belong together. Sure, their chemistry is off the chain. And yeah, Lonnie can throw down in the kitchen. But... shit, I forgot what I was gonna say lol. I think it was something along the lines of... I love this story! And I still do like Cameron. For now. And even Adam. Ahh, this is all so damn addictive! Whenever I read, I feel like I'm with them, chillin' in Justin's house or gettin' chased by the paparazzi. Awesome shit, man. Just awesome.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Ashley! I'm so happy you're liking Alonsha again! YAY! lol See, you were trying to say something bad about LonnieLake, but it's impossible baby! LOL! Thanks for loving my story, but it's definitely not good, LOL! I swear, I wonder why people read my stuff. Especially the fellow authors on this site. I'm humbled by every review! Thanks so much, homeslice!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 06/06/05 - 07:00PM
Title: Meeting Adam
Awwwww! Justin and Cameron are freakin' adorable, dude! Your portrayal of Cameron was so amazingly realistic. I mean, not that I know her, but it seriously felt like watching she and Justin interacting at CFTC all over again. They're cute and close in a very non-sickening way, unlike Britney and Justin were. *Gag* I loved this chapter for that alone. And then, add to that the fact that Justin was totally losing it with Adam... ROFL Hilarious! I'm kinda sad that Cameron and Alonsha are getting along now cuz I liked hating Lonnie, but this is a lot better. Everybody's happy! Well, except Justin, sort of... but he'll get over it. He has kick ass Cam by his side! LOL. I'm such an idiot. Anyway, great chapter, girl. Camstin 4 Life! ROFL.
Author's Response: ROFL! Camstin 4 Life???? OMG! You must've been high writing this review, Ash, LMAO! I'm glad you liked my realistic portrayal of the couple. I didn't get to see them at CFTC, but I saw like one picture and it was kinda cute, lol. Way better than Britney and Justin. Lord knows they made me sick, LOL! Anywho, I'm glad I'm bringing you back to Lonnie's side. It was my intention all along! ::insert evil laught:: Haha! Okay, that was dorky as hell, LOL! Thanks for the review, sugar!
Reviewer: Hollie
AnonymousDate: 06/06/05 - 06:56PM
Title: Birthday Blues
I'd feel sorry for her but.... nah. Justin and Alonsha all the way. Though I'm amused it's taken the boy so long to work out he's jealous, does he live under a rock?
Author's Response: LOL! Damn, I thought you really felt bad, LOL! Yeah, it took Justin all eternity, but he's a guy, so what can I say? LOL! Thanks for the review, sugar!
Reviewer: Danyelle
AnonymousDate: 06/02/05 - 02:45PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Come on just give us a cliff or some way to kill of Cameron and Adam. Or have Cameron and Adam hook up in some drunk way and it would be perfect. You know Justin and Lonnie deserve to be together!! Just do it already
Author's Response: LMAO! No cliffs, people! LOL! The drunk thing is tempting. . .lol. Thanks for the review and suggestions, sugar!
