Reviewer: Sondra
AnonymousDate: 06/02/05 - 02:16PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Ugh, I thought I liked Cameron at first, but dude she's a bitch. Lonnie didn't do shit to her old ass, why can't she just go to her party for Justin's sake? Does she really love him like she says she does?! NO. The bitch always on the phone, she seems to busy for my Justin and I don't like it. And if you ask me, Lonnie's boyfriend is nice and all that shit, but he seems like a phony little prick to me. I think him and Cameron should date. Both of them are just FAKE. And so is Justin and Lonnie, they know they still love each other and oooo way to bring in the new girlfriend and boyfriend and brag about how wonderful they are. BULLSHIT! I wish they'd just go hump each other as it is intended. Okay, I think I'm getting into this story a bit much, but that's what I do when I love stories sooo much and I love yours! So hurry and update Missy! Or I'm coming after you lol. I need another hit! Now gimme it *winks*
Author's Response: LMFAO! OMG! You are hilarious! Cameron is definitely a bitch and I hate it when she's on the phone instead of paying attention to Justin. Everybody goes through a denial stage, so be patient, my dear. Hopefully, everybody will be right where they need to be in the end, lol. Thanks so much for the review! And I'm glad you're lovin' my story, hun. It means a lot to me :)
Oh why don't Cameron go crawl in a hole and die. Old heifa. And awww, Justin is starting to like his Lonnie again, Miss Cam better watch it! I love the way you had the dream of them in his room and they were about to watch The Lord of the Rings...man I thought that was for real for a minute. NICE TRICK! grrr, but I love you for it. It was so cute *grins*. Keep it up and I'll be reading mama! hurry and update pleeease!
Author's Response: LOL! A hole, huh? Better than a cliff, I guess, LOL! I tricked you with the beginning? LOL! Good! I wanted to make ya'll suffer, LOL! Just kidding. . .maybe, lol. Thanks so much for the review, sugar!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/31/05 - 04:27PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
OKAY OKAY OKAY OKAY....I am being...somwhat of a mean evil bitch towards Cam. I admit. LOL. I guess I can feel...*Forces myself to continue* a bit sorry for her and her being jealous. BUT ugh, DID you just have to throw in the sex scene there? LMAO, jk, it was hot...well as hot as it could be for two people with no chemistry like ALONSHA AND JUSTIN. ahahhaa. =) And oh my gosh, BAD Justin thinking about another woman while he fucks Cam. Evil. I think it's safe to say this relatinoship is going down the drain....*sigh* ....so tragic. ;)
Author's Response: LMFAO! Was it that hard to say? LOL! It was a bad thing for Justin to do. I would've smacked the shit out of my dude if he thought about some other female (especially his ex) when we're having sex, lol. And my goodness, making conclusions about their relationship already, huh? LOL! I know you want it, girl, but I don't know if I'll give you that break up just yet, lol. Thanks for the review!
Oh please. Cameron needs to go take her ass to some wrinkle therapy or something and get the fuck over herself. She's anything BUT the "it" girl, so there's NOTHING to show Alonsha. LOL. I can see her getting jealous, but whatever. If she was secure enough in her relationship, she shouldn't be havin these problems. Darn, I guess Cam and Justin should just...break up. As tragic as that would be. I mean, I'd need a box of tissues for that one, but I think I might be able to live. *snort* LMAO. Great chapter, honey. And lmao, I guess Cam does have something to be jealous of, since Justin's not havin' WET dreams about HER. Mwuahahaha. =)
Author's Response: LMFAO! You are mean, Jess, ROFL! Oh yeah, way to be slick with the break up suggestion, LMFAO! Ah, wet dreams. . . LOL
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/31/05 - 04:16PM
Title: The Things He Missed
Whoah. That was supposed to be head...curvy...and who knows what else my dumb ass missed. LOL.
Author's Response: ROFL! I figured that, LMFAO!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/31/05 - 04:15PM
Title: The Things He Missed
Yes, JUSTIN. Leave bony ass OLD wrinkle girl and go with the hot, cury bitch aka Alonsha. LMAO. Oh my god, Cam always on the phone..blah blah. SOOO annoying. I had a freind who used to do that with her man, and I used to want to grab a brush and throw it at her damn had. Annoying!! Justin is missin' Alonsha ....hahaha. WHOO WHOO. =)
Author's Response: LOL! Age is a huge deal, isn't it? LOL. Yes, Alonsha's curves are much more appealing than Cameron's stick figure, but what can I say? LOL. Justin was missing some things, but that doesn't mean anything, does it? LOL Thanks for the review! And no brush throwing, LOL!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/31/05 - 04:11PM
Title: Meeting Adam
Dayum, girl! You're like a freakin' updating machine--I can't keep up! BOO, my life sucks, LMFAO...Ahem. Back to teh story. HAhaha. Okay OMG...ugh ugh ugh. Cameron and Justin just...ok I know this is bitchy, but they just make me wanna vomit in this story! I already don't like Cameron's character, and then add onto her little we have to make up by rules of law shit...UGH slut! LMAO. OH and she's soo annoying, how all of the sudden she agrees with J about Alonsha. And Justin is obviously jealous of Adam, lmao. And why is Alonsha with Adam when she should be making mixed babies with Justin? *dies!!!*
Author's Response: ROFL! Sorry for updating so much, but the ideas kept popping up in my head, LOL. Well, Cameron's psycho according to some of my loyal reviewers, so I guess that explains the complete 360 in her attitude toward Alonsha, LOL. But anywho, Justin's not jealous, just protective, ROFL! Thanks for the review, sugar!
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 05/31/05 - 01:48PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Okay, wasn't Cam and Adam supposed to roll off of the Hollywood hills like three chaps ago? *lol* I can't believe Alonsha and Adam haven't done the freaky-sneaky yet...which is good, because Justin and Alonsha are gonna do it on her birthday (and yes, they will be sober). *shakes head* Tsk, tsk that poor girl hasn't been penetrated in 3 looong-ass yeas. Ew, now I dound like one of those trashy magazine novels. Oh, and compared to Cameron, Alonsha is a child...she's just some over-paid kung-fuing granny. *lmao*
Author's Response: Oops, double review, double response!: LMFAO! Kung-fuing granny! ROFL! My goodness, no hills! LMAO! Yeppers, three long years in theraphy seems to do that to you, lol. Well, just because they haven't yet, doesn't mean they won't, lol. No birthday penetrations, my dear, I can tell you that much, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar! LOL!
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 05/31/05 - 01:47PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Okay, wasn't Cam and Adam supposed to roll off of the Hollywood hills like three chaps ago? *lol* I can't believe Alonsha and Adam haven't done the freaky-sneaky yet...which is good, because Justin and Alonsha are gonna do it on her birthday (and yes, they will be sober). *shakes head* Tsk, tsk that poor girl hasn't been penetrated in 3 looong-ass yeas. Ew, now I dound like one of those trashy magazine novels. Oh, and compared to Cameron, Alonsha is a child...she's just some over-paid kung-fuing granny. *lmao*
Author's Response: LMFAO! Kung-fuing granny! ROFL! My goodness, no hills! LMAO! Yeppers, three long years in theraphy seems to do that to you, lol. Well, just because they haven't yet, doesn't mean they won't, lol. No birthday penetrations, my dear, I can tell you that much, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar!
Reviewer: Meghan Carter
AnonymousDate: 05/30/05 - 09:42PM
Title: Who Makes You Feel?
Ok now this might sound really insensitive but I could care less about cameron. I mean yeah justin is hanging out with alonsha quite a bit but does that mean that he is going to fall in love with her again? Cameron is just over exaggerating too much she needs to realize that justin and alonsha will always share a special bond with each other I know that I'm just rambling on but that is just how I feel about the whole situation. Now if anyone does not agree with me please let me know! I want to know what you think too!!
Author's Response: LOL! A lot of people could care less about Cameron, lol. I don't know where I'm taking this, so the whole love thing is still up in the air. Hopefully ya'll won't be disappointed, but I'm gonna keep ya'll guessing. I love your opinion and if anyone else objects, give a review to comment ;) Thanks for the review, sugar!
