Reviewer: Ash
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 12:09PM
Title: Back To Square One
Haha, I like being the ignorant ass whose opinion differs from everyone else. LOL. And see, this is the shit I'm talkin' about. Alonsha's just bein' a big ol' biatch, gallivanting all over town with Adam like she doesn't care. Now, if she can move on from Justin saying he needs a break in a matter of seconds, there's something WRONG. She went to Rhode Island, got herself a backbone and now she's actin' all high and mighty and shit. What. Ever. I hope Adam chokes on a chicken bone on their date. And I hope Cameron and Justin happen to be at the same place Alonsha and Adam are when it happens. (By the way, I'm jusssst kidding! Mainly cuz whenever I think of an Adam, I think of Levine or Brody and I would never ever ever want either one of them to choke on anything lol. And without an Adam, what would Justin have to be jealous of.) And now, I forgot what else I was gonna say. This is awesome shit, though. I just lovvvve to not love Lonnie. I'm waiting for Justin to cheat on Cameron with her so I can hate on her even more! LOL.
By the way, did you see that picture in Us Weekly of Trace and Elisha leaving Best Buy? Cuz that's exactly what I thought of when I read that lol. Hehe, I'm a dork. Awesomeness, homie!
Author's Response: LMFAO! Damn, Ash. You are HARSH, ROFL. It's cool tho. I love both those Adams and those are the images in my head too, lol. You may love not loving her now, but I'll try my hardest to get you to love her again, LOL. The Us Weekly shots were exactly what I was talking about, ROFL. I'm such a dork, LOL
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 11:37AM
Title: Back To Square One
Is he smoking something?!?! Can I kick his arse too?!?! What is Justin's problem? How dare he listen to that...thing he calls a girlfriend. *grr* I think it's high time Alonsha open 12 cans of whup-ass on Cameron and 2 on Justin. God, these people! It's always the "Children of the Corn" ones that keep f-in things up.
Author's Response: ROFL! 12 CANS! LMFAO! Damn, so much anger, LOL. They do stress you the hell out, don't they? Half the time I wonder why they do the things they do, LMFAO. Thanks for the review, Niq. I'll definitely take what you said into consideration.
Reviewer: Danyelle
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 11:29AM
Title: Back To Square One
Once again I knew everything would work out and all those haters of Lonnie out there, are all pretty much have their foot in their mouth! ;) Hahah I like how she is acting about the whole situation. Cameron needs to jump off a cliff and Justin needs a good ass whooping to realize sometimes you have to do whats best for yourself and not what someone esle thinks is best. He's throwing a perfectly good friendship away because of the "beast" of a girlfriend he has at the moment.
Author's Response: LOL! Cam's far from suicidal, so that cliff thing is out, LMAO. It's cool tho, things will definitely work out, even if Justin's being a dumbass, LOL. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Teeny
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 10:53AM
Title: Back To Square One
Alonsha's being so mature about this! If it were me (and keep in mind I'm about as mature as a pole) I would've marched right up to her and made it "very clear" I didn't appreciate her badmouthing me to Justin. By very clear, I mean a bitch slap...LOL I like Adam...but only because I think he'll bring out the jealous side in Justin who will in turn admit his passionate love for Alonsha and then they'll be back together and then YAY! And if that doesn't happen, well...I'll just write it myself! LOL
Author's Response: ROFL! Bitch slap her, Christina, I've got your back, ROFL! Wow, you like this Adam character, huh? I like him too, but just because he's sweet. You want to use him in a clever plan devised to get Alonsha and Justin back together. Big difference, LOL. Passionate love, huh? LOL. Well, it you write it yourself, everybody will stop reading my crap and read your quality work, LOL. Don't do that to me :( LMFAO, just kidding. Thanks for the review, Teeny.
Reviewer: Helena
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 07:28AM
Title: Back To Square One
I hate Adam too! Boo for their date! Boo!J and A 4ever and ever, I just decided. I can't believe Justin is going to ignore Alonsha just to nake Cameron happy, I understand he needs time but that diesn't mean they have to put their friendship on hiatus, and Cameron needs to be more trusting of Justin, and be less insecure. Make it better please? :( Great update!
Author's Response: LMFAO! I love it when you 'boo' everything, LOL. Cameron definitely needs to trust Justin, and hopefully, a certain somebody will realize this. Thanks for the review, sweetie.
Reviewer: Hollie
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 03:27AM
Title: Back To Square One
Well it's nice to see Justin so whipped *sarcasm*. Of course, it's much nicer to see Alonsha brushing it off and not going into histrionics the way I bet Cameron wanted her to (evidence for the prosecution, like *lol*). Yes, more as soon as physically possible please :o)
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, we'll use it against Cameron, LOL. Justin's definitely whipped, but don't worry, it'll get better. His whipped ass might grow some balls, LMAO. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Tasha
AnonymousDate: 05/11/05 - 02:02AM
Title: Back To Square One
Now see I don't like that Justin need to grown some bigger balls and tell that witch be gone but as in this story and life he still can't see past her big ass mouth . So I want Alonsha to beat that ass. I was proud how she handled herself at dinner she respected her elders i'm all for that cause I was raised that way but I can look past that so she can stomp a mud hole in cam. He thought she gon bet sad and bitter about hin call off the friendship not gon happen i laughed cause she was like whateva adn Kicked it with Adam . I like where you going with this I can't wait for Justin to eat a whole lof of crow so update soon
Author's Response: LOL! Respected her elders, ROFL! Justin may be blinded by the drama queen that is Cameron, but his sight will definitely get clearer in the near future. Thanks for the review, Tasha. I'll try to update ASAP.
Reviewer: Wh|tney
AnonymousDate: 05/10/05 - 10:09PM
Title: Back To Square One
what a dck, dmn cameron...this is not how its 'pose to be. I'm le sad
Author's Response: Don't be sad, sugar. It'll all be okay! LOL I assure you, things will get better. Thanks for the review, Whit.
Reviewer: UTCBeauty
AnonymousDate: 05/10/05 - 09:46PM
Title: Back To Square One
hell yeah this is what i'm talking about...see now this is getting interesting....justin is an ass, granted...a sexy ass but an ass non the less. he should be jealous and i hope he gets really mad about alonsha and her new boo. i thought it was funny cause she was like oh i'm not hurt lol she didn't give a damn and i think that made justin even more mad that he was hurting her , even though he said that wasn't his intention...i think he still wanted some reaction out of her that she would be upset without him or something...yea dream on timberlake you are slowly about to be replaced, so get your shit together..great chapter
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, you might as well write the rest of the story, LOL. You are very insightful, sugar. Getting all the little details. But I've got a feeling Justin might just get his shit together ;) Thanks for the review, hun.
Reviewer: nini22
AnonymousDate: 05/10/05 - 08:49PM
Title: Back To Square One
I don't know where to start with this chapter. First off justin is only putting the friendship on hold because cam is pissed off for letting lonnie back in his life. He is so into pleasing cam that he can't see what is the right thing for him and lonnie. On top of all this he gets jealous of adam at the end of the story
Author's Response: Doesn't he just piss you off? LOL. He is a man, so you know how they can be, LOL. But it'll all fall into place. Patience, my dear, patience. Thanks for the review.
