Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 05/06/05 - 10:57PM
Title: The Other Half
Umm. Is it wrong that I still don't feel bad? LOL. I have to ask myself what the fuck is wrong with me. I'm probably too hard on the poor child, but didn't nobody tell her ass to leave Justin and go see her dumbass daddy. As the old saying goes, ''Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.'' Or some crap like that. She already went through the hell of her father once. That just proves that those idiots in Rhode Island had no clue what the hell they were saying if what she learned sent her back to him. Oh, honey, fuck that. All you need in life is love, and Justin had that on lock. It ain't his fault that she was just too damn blind to see it. Next excuse, please!
Author's Response: LMAO! OMG, Ash, that's terrible, ROFL. It's cool tho, I get where you're coming from. But you gotta put yourself in Lonnie's position, LOL. Okay, okay, I'm going to stop defending her ass, lol. Thanks for the reivew, LOL
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 05/06/05 - 10:42PM
Title: One Step Closer
ROFL. Rhode Island? LMAO. Man, that chapter cracked me up. That's another 'What-the-Fuck?' for the record books. That had me trippin'. Rhode Island! Girl, where do you come up with this stuff? That, as well as Justin cutting her off and telling her 'Everybody's fine'. That made me laugh way too much. I was just waiting for him to shove the cobbler to the side and say it sucked cuz it was nothing like his granny's. LOL. Maybe next time lol. As far as the chapter's contents... Hmmm. I dunno. Every chapter has me liking Dumbaz more and Daniels less. I can't figure out what it is about her. I guess it's the three years. I can't imagine leaving anything for three years and then trying to come back to it like everything is gravy. As JT & BEP would say, Lord have mercy. He needs to drop it on her ass right now that he ain't comin' back to her. LOL. I'm evil, ain't I? Oh freakin' well. Lonnie deserves it right now. Rhode Island. HA!
Author's Response: LMFAO! Ashley, girl, I busted a lung laughing this hard, LOL. Rhode Island was the first thing that came to mind at the time, lol. To this day, I have yet to figure out why, lol. OMG, I was thinking about doing the cobbler thing, but I was like, 'nah, I'll be nice', ROFL. That would've been hilarious tho. *gasp* You like that chick more than Lonnie? OMG! I did a good job of getting ya'll to hate her, LOL. It's cool tho. You might wanted retract that statement in the future, lol.
I am so glad Alonsha's truth gave Justin the kick up the ass he needed to realize...HE DOES NEED HER IN HIS LIFE! IT'S A MUST! Actually, what's even more of a must is that he kicks Cam to the curb (wow, check out my alliteration lol) and then gets back together with Alonsha because dammit, I was just waiting for them to have babies! lol Update soon, I'm in an impatient mood :P
Author's Response: LMAO! BABIES???? ROFL. Okay, everybody wants Cam gone, but I'll let ya'll know that it's not gonna happen, for now. It might happen depending one my mood for future chapters. I'm spontaneous, so you never know, lol. Thanks for the review, Christina. It's always appreciated.
i'm glad there friends again, i wasn't expecting it. i know exactly what he was gonna say about him and cameron's engagement thing. i'm still waiting for them to get back together b/c i don't like cameron in this story or when they are actually together.
Author's Response: Wow, you weren't expecting it? How could I keep them separated for so long? LOL. Everybody hates Cameron now, you just wait and see. LOL
AWESOME! chapter, i am sooo glad they are back to being friends, when justin was talking about droppng there friendship my heart sank, im like nooo! youc an't do that! lol now J just has to kick cam to the curb and go back together!
Author's Response: LOL! I got everybody with the first part, lol. So kicking Cam to the curb is the next step, huh? We'll see. . .lol
Good. Because if he was just gonna up and drop their friendship, I might have had to jump into the story a kick his arse. Wait, does that mean that he proposed to Cameron?
Author's Response: LOL, no need to kick his ass, lol. And the Cameron thing, my lips are sealed, LOL.
Yes I am so glad they're friends again. And that he knows the WHOLE reason to why she left. But when are they gonna have their make-up sex?? Lol
Author's Response: LOL! You horny bum, LOL. They're FRIENDS for the time being, lol. He finally knows the whole truth and it's quite refreshing to have everything out in the open. Thanks for the review, sugar.
