Reviewer: Helena
AnonymousDate: 05/03/05 - 07:04AM
Title: The Other Half
Okay, I'm coming round now. But she REALLY needs to tell Justin whats happened to her, to be honest she should have told him about her father a looooong time ago, but I'm sure she's learnt from her mistakes. Her dad sucks majorly, Alonsha DOES deserve an explaination, although maybe her addiction helped in some way? I dunno. But anyway: Justin NEEDS to call her, he needs to get his facts straight. Great update!
Author's Response: Indeed he does, sugar. Her father sucks ass and Alonsha has definitely learned from her mistakes. I love Justin, but he is being a pain, LOL. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: lil jb
AnonymousDate: 05/03/05 - 04:52AM
Title: The Other Half
her father is such an asshole! i hope his liver keels over and he dies. freakin drinkin' son of a bitch. and justin is starting to get on my nerves. just call the damn woman and work it out you stubborn baby!! oh yeah, update soon.
Author's Response: LOL! Wow, so much anger! ROFL. Yes, Justin needs to pull the stick out of his ass, but will he??? LOL. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Danyelle
AnonymousDate: 05/03/05 - 03:16AM
Title: The Other Half
Hmmm well I'm not sure about that. You just love to leave us hanging. Now all the haters of Alonsha should feel bad I guess. I realize she has issues and its a good thing she got help before she needed up killing herself. Then where would the story be at then? Exactly no where like it is now, cause you stopped it at a particular spot where Justin would get the stick out of his ass and call her. So then she can pour her heart out and then they become friends again. Well friends eventually. But they need to realize life is to short to just throw away a perfectly good friendship or more or whatever you have in store for them. They should be enjoying their lives and doing new things and having fun. Not fighting and being dumb with each other and acting like little kids. Gosh! haha ok done examening the story. Great update really made you think about things! But girl you better update soon...
Author's Response: LOL! Wow, I don't think I need to say anything because you explained it so perfectly. You're very insightful, Danyelle, lol. I'm gonna try to update ASAP, sugar. But I've got exams, so it's gonna be a little hectic. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/02/05 - 10:17PM
Title: The Other Half
*sigh* But--but--well, I SUPPOSE I can be a little sorry for her--but I still can't help but think if the stupid bitch hadn't ever gone and left Justin like an idiot, and then none of that would have all happened like it did...and and....don't you love it how I can be such a blubbering cry baby one minute in Get Lifted and then come to this story and be the mean bitchy that I am? Muwhahaha, I am a gemini though--you know us split personalities. ;) ;) ;) Good chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, my sister's a gemini, so I know exactly what you mean, LOL. Well, you have to remember her reason for leaving in the first place, sugar. I know Justin was the perfect man, but you can't love anyone before you love yourself. Thanks for the review, hun.
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 05/02/05 - 09:01PM
Title: The Other Half
That was deep. She really went through some things. I'm just glad it's not what I thought it was.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Gigi. That was a traumatizing experience, but no baby mama drama, LOL. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 05/02/05 - 08:33PM
Title: The Other Half
Wow, um, yeah that's a good enough excuse for me. I hope Justin get's over himself and talks to her so she can get out her story. I love this story!!
Author's Response: YAY! Finally, it's good enough. I sorta of wrote it badly, so it seemed like a "WTF?" moment, LOL. Oh well, glad you're still loving it! Thanks for the review, Brittany!
Reviewer: utcbeauty
AnonymousDate: 05/02/05 - 08:03PM
Title: The Other Half
i just don't see her as an alcoholic. that seemed out of the blue to me, and she should have kicked her father's ass in his own damn home instead of crying about it. he can't do anything to her she is a grown ass woman. she didn't find closure cause she ran away once again
Author's Response: LOL, wow. So harsh, lol. I'm never writing again, lol. Well, alcoholics aren't a certain group of people. They can be anybody and it's always out of the blue. Don't hate Alonsha! LOL. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/02/05 - 12:26PM
Title: One Step Closer
OH I didn't even see you updated till I checked your page. But anyways, UM...excuse that bitch. That better not be the freakin' HALF of it. LMAO. I'm sorry, I'm on the ones who say FUCK it, don't forgive her. I mean....
"No, I don't," Justin sneered, "I don't understand you and this freaky retreat you went on to cleanse your damn spirit." THANK YOU JUSTIN, THAT PRETTY MUCH SAYS IT ALL...lmao.
ahem Sorry. But damn. I'm happy she cleansed her spirit and shit, but ugh. Just ....next chapter please. hheheheheh. =)
Author's Response: LMAO, you are a trip, I swear, lol. Ah, yet another Alonsha hater. I feel like Alonsha should die in an accident so ya'll could feel bad, LOL. Just kidding. . .maybe, LOL. I'll try to get the chapter up soon, but school first, sugar. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Danyelle
AnonymousDate: 05/01/05 - 09:55PM
Title: One Step Closer
AUHHH...you just left us hanging like that. I know there is something worse she is hidding.I'm so excited to see what happens next. So in love this this story. I think she needs to just be honest though. I'm glad that Justin let go of his pride for just a little while. Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad you're a supported of the Justin lend Alonsha Your Ear foundation, LOL. Everybody seems to hate her, but it's good to know somebody doesn't, lol. She'll be honest, don't worry about that. I'm glad you still love the story. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Jrtluva05
AnonymousDate: 05/01/05 - 08:59PM
Title: One Step Closer
really really good! i love this story so much, i think Justin should like really think about what he said, man! he need to understand what she was going through yeah he had his own stress but damn when a girls self-esteem gets that low of course there gonna run! lol alright great chapter!
Author's Response: LOL, another person who's on Alonsha's side. It's good to have you! LOL. Hopefully Justin will understand the other half too, LOL. Thanks for the review.
