Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 05/01/05 - 07:18AM
Title: One Step Closer
Man, I disagree! I don't hate Alonsha at all. She needed time to herself; perhaps she went about it the wrong way, but it must have taken a lot of courage for her to leave something as stable as Justin. She seems much happier now, and I'm sure Justin can understand to some level that her leaving was a good thing, because she's a lot more confident now. Of course, I feel terrible for him and part of me is glad he found happiness in Cameron...although he would be happier with Alonsha and I would not oppose the distruction of Ms Diaz, but I'll just keep that to myself....lol ;)
Author's Response: LOL. Oh Teeny, the one who understands Ms. Daniels. So glad to see it. I feel that same way you do, but there is another part to this, LOL. Hopefully I can right it out the right way. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 05/01/05 - 01:42AM
Title: One Step Closer
i wish they had this review things at the bottom of the chapter like on the hpfanfiction site b/c i'm tired of all the pages and clickin.
i think she should have just left justin alone to do whateva he wants. she sits around waiting for him to get over that, she just being stupid b/c he's not. i don't know what reason she's trying to make up with him for but it better be a damn good reason. i think she had a baby and that could be the only reason she stayed away that long unless she was a druggie on the low low.
Author's Response: OMG, I'm not saying anything about that review, LOL. Alonsha and Justin separate forever? Hmm. . .
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 10:55PM
Title: One Step Closer
AH! That whore didn't tell him!!
Author's Response: LOL. Patience! LOL
Reviewer: nini22
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 06:21PM
Title: One Step Closer
what the fuck was that crazy ass excuse she gave. It's something she's holding back from him and I hope it's big so that I can get over that lame ass excuse she spit out to justin lol
Please keep going this story get's better everytime I read it
Author's Response: LOL! You want a juicy one, don't you? LMAO. We'll see, we'll see. Thanks for the review, lol
Reviewer: Whtny
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 05:29PM
Title: One Step Closer
note to JT kick Cam to curb..that is all
Author's Response: Patience, my dear. Patience.
Reviewer: UTCBeauty
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 05:01PM
Title: One Step Closer
wow. her excuse sucked monkey balls for real. did she even work while she was down there to pay for that stupid ass retreat. ugh. who said they thought she was pregnant....that would be a nice twist. but justin would go crazy cause it seems he really does love cameron. but in a way i don't feel sorry for alonsha...i don't care what happened if you loved him you could tell him, talk to him, call him, SOMETHING geez he's justin freakin timberlake.! but anyways yea...that's my two cents for the day. great chapter update soon.
Author's Response: LOL. Wow. Ya'll really hate Alonsha, LOL. I'm surprised, rofl. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 04:34PM
Title: One Step Closer
Her little explanation wasn't even the half of it. I guessing she had his baby too. Because let's face that excuse was total BS! And him with his own excuse of how he could never move well it didn't take him long now did it.
Author's Response: LOL, everybody and this baby drama, LOL. Be nice, all of this will be explained. LOL. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Michelle
Signed
Date: 04/30/05 - 03:06PM
Title: One Step Closer
Well, that's wonderful. He waits five months to move on. That doesn't exactly say much of his relationship if he loved her that much. He's an ass, but I can understand why he feels that way when it comes to her. Guess we're going to have to see how this goes. Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL, don't worry your little head. Everything will be explained, sugar. I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 03:00PM
Title: One Step Closer
That excuse sucks, she better have given birth to his baby or murdered someone to have left for three years with no phone call or anything. I can't wait for the next chapter though :)
Author's Response: LMFAO! Wow, that's drama, baby! I like the way you think, lol. I'll update as soon as I can.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/05 - 02:24PM
Title: One Step Closer
That excuse isn't good enough for me either, it doesn't explain the three years and it doesn't explain why she didn't call, although I do have some idea why she might have needed so long. She should really have talked to Justin in the first place, or left a better letter. And yeah, five months? Seriously? Pft. Great update my dear!
Author's Response: LOL, you guys are mean! LOL. LOL, five months was kinda quick, but that will be explained later on. Thanks for the review.
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