Wow. I don't know what to say, oreven whose side to take just, wow. You do a wonderful job with plot, lemme tell you that. After the history that Alonsha had with Justin, I just can't see him loving Cameron or ANYBODY else the way he loved Alonsha. Not to mention Cameron is a ..., well let's just say, Justin can do much better.
I know school is a bitch right now, take it easy and update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: LOL, it's complicated isn't it? I wonder who's side I'm on sometimes too, LOL. I don't know when I'll be able to update, school's a pain right now, so I don't know, LOL. I'm going to try to update this weekend tho, so be on the lookout! LOL. Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Woo! Make the bitch keep on sweatin' it out. Sorry, but Lonnie's just not my favorite person right now. I'm like Justin -- I don't even care what she has to say. There's no excuse for not pickin' up a damn phone. Shit, she she coulda sent a text message! It's the twenty-first century. No excuses, honey. And since this is fiction, I think I've actually found the capacity to think that Camstin is... cute! I mean, I've said it real life a couple of times because of a picture or some shit, but here, I genuinely find them endearing. Maybe it's just cuz I'm not ready for him to forgive Alonsha yet lol. I did notice how Justin managed to gloss over the 'I love you, too', so I even felt a little twinge of sadness for Dumbaz. We'll see where my emotions flow in due time. But dude, you gotta gimme some mo'. I'm so glad they're back!
Author's Response: LOL! Wow, you noticed that he didn't respond? You are too good, ROFL. Yes, it may seem unexplainable, but maybe she'll find the right words to justify her actions. Sometimes, you've got to put yourself in someone else's shoes, honey. I'll give you more in a little bit, but school is kicking my ass right about now, so academics first, fiction later, lol. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: MichelleSignedDate: 04/27/05 - 11:21AM
Title: Home Sweet Home
Justin is being an asshole once again. Poor Trace! And he's talking like that in front of Cameron and his parents. Can we say, try finding some privacy? Now the girl knows something is up, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Maybe she'll break up with him, then he can go back to Alonsha and they'll live happily ever after. Who am I kidding, I know. lol A girl can wish! Update soon, love.
Author's Response: LOL! Well, when you're pissed off, you don't think about other people, LOL. Yeah, Cam's interested which will lead to some other stuff, LOL. You can wish and hope, you never know what can happen ;)
Justin is so stubborn! Yady yady ya, Alonsha hurt him, but she is CLEARLY trying to make amends and what does he go and do?? Act like a stupid bitch and not even listen to her explanation!! As for Cameron...blah. She's too cute for my liking--"Just like I love you"...sorry honey, but Justin belongs with Alonsha, ! And that's just the way it gotsta be...Damn, I keep on forgetting that it's not my decision to make! LOL You better update soon, cause now Lonnie's got Trace on her side, which can only mean good things!
Author's Response: LOL! Justin is being a little bitch, isn't he? ROFL! Oh well, he's been torn and broken. Cam's in it for the long run, whether ya'll like it or not. 'Cause I don't know what to do with her, ROFL. Okay, I'll try to update soon, but school comes first, sugar. Thanks for the review, hun.
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 04/26/05 - 08:45AM
Title: Home Sweet Home
He wanted to see her and why she just up and left, but his monkey-ass kicks her off of his property!!!!! *shakes head* Justin, Justin. Stupid boy!
Author's Response: LOL! MONKEY??? ROFL! I know, but he's angry so he acted out irrationally, LOL. It's cool tho, don't sweat it. Things will get better.
Reviewer: Helena
AnonymousDate: 04/26/05 - 05:07AM
Title: Intervention
Yo! Woman! Update! :D I agree with everyone else, you can't leave us hanging like that. And Justin can't be angry forever right? Right? Please tell me I'm right... I'm glad Trace went over and listened, and I'm glad Alonsha was honest in her explaination. And Cameron still sucks lol.
Author's Response: LOL! You think you hate her now. . . :insert evil laugh: Anywho, I'll try to update soon. I rushed this in order to get something posted. But school is kicking my sorry ass, so you'll have to be patient with me, LOL.
Reviewer: lil jb
AnonymousDate: 04/26/05 - 04:52AM
Title: Intervention
aww man u gotta update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm gonna try, but school is kicking my ass! LOL
