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Reviewer: anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/06 - 09:39PM
Title: All Falls Down
please update!!! you're killing me in anticipation. awesome story by the way. =]
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 02/11/06 - 11:19PM
Title: All Falls Down
wow!!! that was crazy!!! cant wait to find out what happens next!!!
Reviewer: Nicole
Anonymous
Date: 02/11/06 - 01:42PM
Title: All Falls Down
Okay- so I kinda suck at life- or at least at writing feedback- But you gotta know that i DO LOVE this story! Ya get me soooo stressed from time to time though! Sittin on the edge of my seat is startin to hurt my @ss!!! Keep it up cuz I need the updates to keep comin!! :) I love it!! ~Much love~ Nicole
Reviewer: matthews baby
Anonymous
Date: 02/10/06 - 10:54PM
Title: All Falls Down
so...its about that time...time for an update lol. i like this story a lot the only thing i would say you need to work on is your tenses. cause there are some parts that are present tense and you'll suddenly switch back to past. it was a little annoying when that happened but over all i really really like this story!
Author's Response: yeah, i suck at tenses. lord knows i just write this shit, i don\'t really think about it, LOL! Anyways, I\'m glad you like it. =]
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 02/10/06 - 03:47AM
Title: All Falls Down
that was just the saddest thing i ever read. i did expect him to be mad like get out and i'll call you when i want ot talk to you. he doesn't want to talk to them anymore, which i don't believe.
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 02/08/06 - 10:15PM
Title: All Falls Down
Awe...I hope things work out...and Justin forgives her for doing what she did.
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 02/08/06 - 04:47PM
Title: All Falls Down
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! At least Lonnie finally told.
Reviewer: Didi14
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/06 - 11:37AM
Title: All Falls Down
Wow. I'm so glad that she finally told him. I hope that Justin realizes that Alonsha really loves him and that Cam is the bitch!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/06 - 01:44AM
Title: All Falls Down
...I told her. I told her she should have listened to ME! AHHH! I am so mad. FUCKING LONNIE. Update soon.
Reviewer: Tanya
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/06 - 01:19AM
Title: All Falls Down
well the dirty laundry is out in the open...now whats gonna happen next... hopefully you dont wait a long time to update cause thatll kill me!
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