Reviewer: TaccoraSignedDate: 10/02/06 - 01:04PM
Title: 4. You Want A Hug?
I loved this chapter and Devin's character was definitely one I could relate to.
Reviewer: justinzgirlkbSignedDate: 08/31/06 - 12:42AM
Title: 30. Eventually
ok, so i finally got my ass in order and read this story. and while i'm truly in awe of the sheer amazingness, i'm hopelessly dissatisfied. now, that's probably because i'm a bitch who wanted devin and jt to finally get it together and be together. beyonce....wow. but still, absolutely loved this story and will honestly still wonder about these characters......
Reviewer: Deena
AnonymousDate: 08/02/06 - 05:04PM
Title: 30. Eventually
This was one hell of a story. Many props. Took me 5 days to get thru it but i loved every word. Fabulous!
Reviewer: sChErZoSignedDate: 07/30/06 - 11:19PM
Title: 27. Without Peace Of Mind
ok, so i'm actually reading this on your website, but i felt the need to comment on here. so i'm in tears because i can't believe you actually did that. omg, it seems so real, and that's the bad part about it. i could actually see that happening. *sniffles* ok, i have to keep reading though.
wow. ok, so i know i probably jumped on the bandwagon kinda late; but i'm luvin' this story!
Reviewer: Renece
AnonymousDate: 04/26/06 - 04:11PM
Title: 24. Wanted Some Fresh Air
I was just reading through some old chapters and honestly Ash, you're amazing. I don't know how many times, how many different ways I can say it but this story is just incredible and I'm so proud of you for writing it! I especially loved everything about this chapter. You're too damn talented for your own good!
Reviewer: UbiquityEssenceSignedDate: 02/26/06 - 12:37PM
Title: 30. Eventually
i absolutely loved loved LOVED your story. it was really deep. although i really wished justin and devin would've worked out...but your writing is amazing!
Reviewer: TimberlakeSignedDate: 01/31/06 - 01:28PM
Title: 30. Eventually
Ugh, i don't know if that was a good ending or a bad one, so i'll just say it's. . . a realistic view of what's to come. I just wish Justin wasn't so negative about the future. Him and Bee could work if the mofo could have some faith. And yes, it took him a minute to figure out he was suppose to be with her. I always knew in the back of my mind, but i was rooting for Devin. Oh, that bitch did him dirty in the end, lol. This story was just so. . . wow. I don't know. I really think I prefer his cookie-cut image rather than the gritty truth. Call me crazy, but I really think ignorance would've been bliss in this case. Every chapter had some form of hurt and I couldn't image going through life with nothing but lies, lies, and more lies. He had too much shit done to him and by him in his twenty-some odd years and it all started because of that bitch britney, lol. I know, I know, he doesn't blame her, but I do, LOL! That heffa was no good and he should've seen that from the start, lol. Granted, that doesn't justify his rude, disgusting, and incomprehensible actions, but it was the beginning of it all. I really hope that everything in this story didn't happen. As intriguing as it was and as beautifully written as it is, the shit is still painful. I guess I'll never know though. Thank you so much for writing this dark and grimmy perspective of his life, Ash. You always find a way to captivate me. Loved it, hated it, cried because of it, but it was worth every tear, every curse word, and every night I stayed up reading (yes, it was that good, lol). Congratulations on creating yet another masterpiece.
Reviewer: TimberlakeSignedDate: 01/30/06 - 12:07AM
Title: 29. This Is Gonna Hurt
Oh my goodness, she is terrible. He's terrible. Back to old ways, but new secrets. New pain. I thought things were better, but the shit just got worst. I cried again, just to let you know. It's so sad to see them go through all this. Hurts like a motherfucker.