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Reviewer: Vincenza
Anonymous
Date: 02/11/05 - 06:36AM
Title: ...Happily ever after
I thought this was fuckin' awesome. It was good to hear what both parties were thinking. Maybe you should write a sequel, and Justin does call his mother.
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/04 - 11:58PM
Title: ...Happily ever after
I loved the story, it told what both were feeling and thinking. And Justin's mother needs to get a divorce from Paul, he changed her in to a racist bitch.
Author's Response: Thanks! I kind of wanted people to see what was going on with both of them opposed to just one side, but a lot of people didn't really like the story, so thanks for your kind reply:)
Reviewer: Audrey
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/04 - 11:25AM
Title: ...Happily ever after
Hey this is a cool story. I love the switching of the POV, it showed what was going down on both counts. I thought the ending was cute too. Man, I love all your stories especially stories with this love/hate theme. I'm a big fan of those. Those love scenes were hot chica! Loved it all!
Reviewer: pnkpanther2003
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/04 - 02:31AM
Title: ...Happily ever after
This was areally good story with a really sweet ending.
Do u have any other stories?
Author's Response: lol wow someone who didn't think this story sucked! Thanks! If you click on my name all my other stories pop up, thanks for reading.
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Anonymous
Date: 05/01/04 - 01:50AM
Title: ...Happily ever after
There was a lot of dialouge and not enough describing things...but over all it was a good concept...
Reviewer: wh|tney
Anonymous
Date: 04/16/04 - 08:19PM
Title: ...Happily ever after
sucks his 'friends' and fam didn't come around--glad they at least stuck together. But only issue I have it switching POV w/o any indication really and things repeating
Reviewer: whitney
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/04 - 04:53PM
Title: A bit of understanding
umm im a bit confused...some of the chaps have repititve parts O_o
Author's Response: wel its repitive because its from both of their point of views, its basically all the same material just from how they see it so I guess it doesn't matter which one you really read until towards the middle of the story where more of the story is in different parts
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