Reviewer: Mariah111384
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/05 - 11:51AM
Title: Exquisite Extreme
First of all, LOVE the theme. She's one of the best singers out there. The story is very interesting. Situations are not what I had expected and I'm really excited to see what developes as you grow with the story. I tell ya, this writing thing, compared with what I wrote in the past, I think all we have to do is grow. There is no best, its only maturity in what you do really. Take care man! :) Great story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you. I truly do love your story Stripped, so thanks for reviewing mine. I'm hoping to develop, because sometimes I just don't know what to write, but then sometimes it just poors out. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: dizzyupthegirl
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/05 - 09:07PM
Title: It Just Ain't Right
well this sounds pretty promising. i love the way you write in first person, as if it's really happening to you. i just wish the chapters were longer and had a little dialogue. anyhoo, update soon
Author's Response: I'm trying to get that in. I want more dialogue too. Not too much, but definitely some more. I'm glad you like it, though! :)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/05 - 08:49PM
Title: It Just Ain't Right
Oh I really like this it's sounds like it's going to be good.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it! :)
