Reviewer: dizzyupthegirl
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/05 - 09:07PM
Title: It Just Ain't Right
well this sounds pretty promising. i love the way you write in first person, as if it's really happening to you. i just wish the chapters were longer and had a little dialogue. anyhoo, update soon
Author's Response: I'm trying to get that in. I want more dialogue too. Not too much, but definitely some more. I'm glad you like it, though! :)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/05 - 08:49PM
Title: It Just Ain't Right
Oh I really like this it's sounds like it's going to be good.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it! :)
