Reviewer: broken_souL
AnonymousDate: 04/24/05 - 06:46PM
Title: Part 1: The Begining
Interesting. Very interesting. -scratches chin- update soon1
Reviewer: TeenySignedDate: 04/24/05 - 01:52PM
Title: Part 1: The Begining
Wow, excellent start. Very intriguing and dark--simplistic but powerful. I can't wait until I really know the ins and outs of the character and the "he" she talks about. Well done!
Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 04/24/05 - 12:56PM
Title: Part 1: The Begining
wow, this is going to be amazing, I can tell. That was great, update again soon!!
