Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/31/06 - 01:56AM Title: The Secret's Out

Great story.  I really love how you capture the dialogue.  I can believe that little kids are talking, not adult dialogue that you tweak.  Especially when Justin turns and asks cassy not to divorce him.  It's a prime example of their friendship, and despite the fact that they love one another and have this deep relationship, they don't understand all of that...they just know they need one another.  Brilliant.


Reviewer: Angel Anonymous Date: 10/01/05 - 10:58AM Title: The Secret's Out

That was sad! But a very sweet ending to It! Please update soon!


Reviewer: dancewithurheart08 Anonymous Date: 10/01/05 - 08:52AM Title: The Secret's Out

"don't ever divorce me okay?" awww that was so sweet! such a sad ending to that chapter tho..ohh well. update soon

Author's Response: GIRL, i cannot believe you're still keeping up with them! especially since my lazy butt hardly updates! haha but i appreciate it, TREMENDOUSLY.





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