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Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/05 - 08:06PM
Title: We Belong Together
Aw, man. You've got me at a standstill, Michelle. Seeing the love between them is. . .wow. Justin's feelings are hitting me hard because I can see he's sincerely sorry for what he did. And that candy kiss thing. . .awwwwwww. Damn, he's such a good man. But he broke her trust, ya know? Maybe I'm too much like Jules, but I really couldn't bring myself to be with a cheater. I don't want to come off as harsh or anything, but the worst thing you can do in a relationship is break the trust. It's the base of everything. You can barely be friends without trust. . . I don't know. His sincerity is killing me. He realizes his mistake and is man enough to admit he was the cause of all the drama they're going through. Jesus pieces, you're racking my brain with all this thinking, LOL! Loved it!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/05 - 02:36PM
Title: Crashing Into The Shortstop
Where the hell have I been? Forgive me dahling...anyway, Julianna, or Britney Part II LOL, better realize that no matter how much of a cutie Derek Jeter is (I'm a Yankees girl too ;) ), Justin is a) perhaps even more of a cutie b) the most understanding guy this side of never and c) the father of her freaking child! How perfect is that? I can understand her want to "experience" and everything, but why look for something she's already found? Ah well, I just hope DJ (lol I'm such a geek, but I just think that's the coolest nickname) is a passing character, because J + J 4 EVA!!! Lol Ignore me, but greatness throughout =) Well done dear!
Reviewer: vanessa
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 11:32PM
Title: Crashing Into The Shortstop
ooo i love it! it's going to be so awesome to have Derek Jeter in the story. He is such a hottie! Go Yankees!
Reviewer: Nikki
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 01:32PM
Title: Crashing Into The Shortstop
Nooo she needs to be with JUSTIN! lol, great job. Update soon! :)
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 01:23PM
Title: Crashing Into The Shortstop
Awww, interesting. Justin's gonna have some competition. Sweet. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: JTsprincess
Signed
Date: 06/18/05 - 05:48PM
Title: We Belong Together
OMG! I LOVE this story! I loved Waiting On Him, and I love the sequel, u r awsome!!! If there was a higher rating then 10, I would give the max.
Author's Response: Aw, JTsprincess, you're too sweet. I'm glad you're loving the story. Thank you for the review, and I'm going to try to update soon.
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 04:57PM
Title: We Belong Together
I LOVE this story! That was a great update. Keep up the awesome work, and update soon,
Author's Response: Thank you, Lola. I'm glad that you're enjoying this. Gives me motivation. ;)
Reviewer: Ciara
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 04:41PM
Title: We Belong Together
Too wordy. Its hard for me to enjoy the writing. Maybe a suggestion would be not rush into things I feel like they're moving too fast. I do like the idea you have going though.
Author's Response: I'm sorry it's hard for you to enjoy my writing, Ciara, but that's just my style. I don't think they're moving too fast, because throughout the chapters I'm stating that weeks are passing before they're moving forward. Thank you for your suggestion though, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Nikki
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 02:23PM
Title: We Belong Together
I LOVE this story! It's great! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nikki. I'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: Amber-jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 01:51PM
Title: We Belong Together
awesome update!!! yay it was sooo good. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Amber! I love that you enjoyed the update.
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