Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/05 - 05:29PM
Title: Chapter 8
Dudette. . .I cried, so bad, lol. That chapter was so emotional. I felt everything everyone was feeling. Maggie's tears caused my own to fall. All her words were breaking my heart. She thought Kel cheated just so her and Justin could be together so she could be seen as "normal" or whatever you call it. She was just confused and hurting. But that doesn't justify her actions. Mags loved her like crazy and she broke her trust. Then she runs back to Justin, fucks him to get away from everything. He breaks it up to ask her to let him lover her (so romantic btw, lol). But all she does is run, again. I understand that love can hurt, but you've got to be willing when there's a guy, begging and pleading for your heart. Jesus pieces, this is so confusing. Oh, and Allison. . . goodness, poor child. Her uncle did that shit to her? That's really messed up. She should've been honest with Justin rather than give him a threesome with two lesbians, lol. Then again, what if the relationship was a whole sympathy thing? She wanted him to love her so badly. She can't blame Kel for "taking" him. Justin's the one that fell for her. It's nobody's fault really. Love is just unpredictable and happens at the best and worst times. I just feel bad for everybody now. Nobody's happy, Lisa. How did you manage that? LOL! The woman Justin loves is too wrapped up in her inner drama to love her back. The woman Kel loves is completely devestated after walking in on her having sex with a man she swore she wasn't messing with. The Alice is heart broken because Justin never really loved her even though she would die for him without a second thought. Kel is just all types of fucked up and the center off every piece of drama surrounding her. Damn. I love it, lol. Update soon, sugar.
Reviewer: chapstickonly
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 10:13PM
Title: Chapter 8
great chapter, but if just when you're about to get kel and justin together you bring back crystal i will lose my fucking mind.
Reviewer: chapstickonly
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 10:13PM
Title: Chapter 8
great chapter, but if just when you're about to get kel and justin together you bring back crystal i will lose my fucking mind.
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 09:47PM
Title: Chapter 8
Very good chapter. I really hope that Maggie and Kel can work it out and at least be friends again. And I hope that Kel can get it together while Justin is still willing to put up with her drama, before he decides he won't wait anymore. Very, very good chapter. I really love this story. I'm so into it now. Update soon please and thank you.
Reviewer: Kitty
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 08:13PM
Title: Chapter 8
Yay! i'm so glad u updated i absolutly love this story and yet again ur chapters have left me yearning 4 more with their detailed drama. I have 2 say i feel like such a bitch all this time i've been encouraging JT and Kel relationship not giving a toss about poor Maggie and now i feel it 4 Allison. I now don't kno who i want to be with Justin. Keep up the great writing and update soon. x
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 07:54PM
Title: Chapter 8
Wow. I love it. What is she gonna do? Will she follow her heart? I hope so. J deserves it. Please update soon bc I just love this story. Thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 06:18PM
Title: Chapter 8
She's ,ore perlexed than ever? yeah, there's a lot of that going around, think I caught it too. But then that is the mark of some truly fantastic story telling - I don;t know who to blame or root for. Excellent work, but then I expect nothing less ;o)
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 05:18PM
Title: Chapter 8
i love this. you know, this is the one of the few times that i don't want the girl to get with justin in the end...just because i feel like the others in the story deserve happiness two...while, i think jt and kel make sense together, i can't get kel and maggie out of my head....so i dunno how i feel...either way, great job. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Fionnuala
Signed
Date: 07/09/05 - 04:13PM
Title: Chapter 8
Wow, so much drama. Crazy. I feel really bad for Maggie and Allison. They're basically going through the same thing. Ooh! They should totally get together and, like, have some Chai and talk and stuff. A little bonding, therapy session, if you will. It would be awesome. Anyway...as for Kel and Justin, at the moment I kind of don't want them to be together. I can't really explain why. I guess I just think she's a litlte too screwed up for this right now. And I'm not sure she really cares about him, so that kind of sucks. Yeah, so...I love this story. Update soon!
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 03:37PM
Title: Chapter 8
That was another amazing chapter. I really want to know what happened between Justin and Crystal. I feel really sorry for Allison I hope she will get better. Update soon and keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And actually, I explained what happened between them in Chapter 4. She's black, and her parents didn't like the fact that she was dating a white guy. Plus, she couldn't handle the way people reacted to them together. That's why Kel feels such a connection to her because they essentially dealt with things the same way.
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