Reviews For Velvet
Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/07/05 - 08:43AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow. I'm torn. I know Mags is hurting, but my love for Kel and J wins. I just hope Justin knows what he's talking about when he says everything's going to be okay? Is she going to eventually talk to her parents and will they accept her? I know that she probably misses them, but I can't imagine going back to so-called family when they won't accpet you until you change. I've taken up enough space here. can't wait for an update!


Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/07/05 - 08:09AM Title: Chapter 5

You're an amazing writer. this chapter was great and they way you capture all of that sexual tension is wonderful. Now, if only you could bottle that rename it "Essence de Justin" or some sappy shit like that and sell it, you'd be rich too, lol. Sorry, I'm a little tired. Anyway, since that technology has to be invented, I'll continue to read each unbelievable chapter.


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 07/05/05 - 03:44PM Title: Chapter 7

Ok. I know. I was a little late with the reading, but whew. Now that was some drama. I LOVE IT! You rock. Poor Maggie. My heart breaks for her... slightly. Mwahahaha.


Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous Date: 07/03/05 - 04:27PM Title: Chapter 7

Somebody should tell Kels that if she wants people to stop leaving she should stop with the surprises. I hope she and Maggie can still be friends, though. Poor Maggie. Kels' got a lot of fixing to do. Well I guess maybe she kind of fixed the thing with her parents when she hooked-up with Justin who's not a girl. I very much look forward to the next chapter (and I wouldn't mind if you updated WIB in the meantime, wink, wink). This was a record quick update, thank you very much.


Reviewer: Timberlake Anonymous Date: 07/02/05 - 09:09PM Title: Chapter 7

You know what, you, Jess, and Chris are trying to kill me. All this heartbreaking drama is. . . heartbreaking, LOL! OMG, first her parents and then Maggie. Poor Kel. Everything's fucked up. Speaking of fucking, that scene was HOT! LOL! I know it all backfired in the end, but still. . .lol. Justin's screwed too. He wants Kel, but she doesn't know what the hell she wants. I think she needs to take a moment to breathe. Too much shit is going down at the same time. Loved it, update soon, sugar.


Reviewer: Timberlake Anonymous Date: 07/02/05 - 09:08PM Title: Chapter 6

OMG, dudette, I'm crying! LOL! That was so sad and I know what it's like to have strict parents. My parents would do the same thing if anyone in my family turned out to be gay. So sad, so sad. Then Justin's just sitting there, LOL! I would hate to be in his shoes. He can't say anything because it's just not his place. Jesus pieces, that was so sad and dramatic. The whole time they were arguing I didn't blink, LMAO! That was so good Lisa!!!! Loved it. I'm sad that it's ending soon :(


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 07/02/05 - 08:01PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow! That was really cool, i'm so glad Kel And Justin finally got it together nut u had me literely biting my nails cos i had a feeling Maggie would catch them and unfortunatly on her grandad's table. Aww poor Maggie but besides that what a Hot chapter! I'm lovin it and can't wait to read more. Hope u update soon. x


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 07/02/05 - 12:38PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG. I got a ne w fave story. Great job. Please update soon and thanks. J&B!


Reviewer: Mattison30 Signed Date: 07/01/05 - 09:30PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm not sure if I've ever left a review for this story but I have been reading it. I just had to review after reading that chapter. At first all I could think was, FINALLY! But then my morals kicked in and I was thinking, NO! KEL, DON'T SLEEP WITH HIM UNTIL YOU BREAK IT OFF WITH MAGGIE! And then I was all sad for Kel and for Maggie when Maggie walked in and had to see that. Oh you just had a me on one big emotional rollercoaster. Never-the-less, this was one amazing chapter for it to evoke so many different emotions. This whole story is amazing and like nothing I have ever read before. I applaud you for coming up with such an original story idea and for writing it so eloquently. Awesome job and I hope you update soon. :)


Reviewer: Gracie Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 09:29PM Title: Chapter 7

Geez, finally when Kel and Justin get together its the worst timing ever. I feel really bad for Maggie. especially since she just helped Kel through a really rough patch. People should break up before they screw other people! GAH! haha great update





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