Reviews For Velvet
Reviewer: nini22 Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 07:44PM Title: Author's Note - Please Read First

Ok I'm not sure that I liked them getting together like this. Why did they have to get it on so quick and on maggies beloved table. I knew once they got going something was gonna spoil their love making affair. I wish like many others that kel would have left maggie first and then started having sex with justin but who can resist the timbersnake lol


Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 06:31PM Title: Chapter 7

FINALLY! lol, but I can't believe Maggie walked in on them. I would've thought she would break up with her first. I hope everything turns out ok! Great job! Update soon.


Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 07/01/05 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 7

Well damn! I'm not even sure how I feel about that. Cause all this time I've been wanting Justin and Kel to get together and then when it finally happens...it felt wrong. Like she was only going to be with him cause she was too afraid or too tired of fighting against the current of outside forces that were hell bent on tearing her relationship with Maggie apart - a relationship which she occassionally has her moments of not being sure that she even wants to be in. Like it was an experiment for her or something. And then while they were doing it I kept thinking, 'Please don't let Maggie come back. Please don't let that happen!' And then what happens?! BAM...Maggie's back a little earlier than expected and finds the two of them tangled up together. I don't even know what to think now...cause I can see how Justin loves her, but Maggie loves her too. But the question still remains who does Kel love? I mean, really, really love. In an ideal - i.e. selfish Kel - world Kel would be able to keep both of them. But since Maggie has now found her getting it on with Justin on the table that that reminds her of her dead grandfather...I'm not so sure that even a 'let's just be friends' will happen. But one can always hope. :) Update soon!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 05:36PM Title: Chapter 7

Geez, those two never get to finish a sex session do they? At any rate, as much as I wanted them to hook up, I'm positively appalled that she didn;t break up with Maggie first, more appalled that they did it on Maggie's most prized possession... and also kind of worried. That seemed awfully quick - I know Kel's hurting and all, but does she really want to be with Justin or is she just freaked about her parents and running from Maggie to somebody she knows they approve of??

Author's Response: No, they really don't. At first, I was contemplating having them caught while they were still going at it, but then I figured I'd be nice and let them finish. LOL But good, I'm glad someone's appalled. You should be. Everytime I write one of these cheating scenarios, I always get people egging it on, and I'm like...hello? Have you no values? LMAO. Justin makes people a little crazy, myself included. Heh. But anyway, very good question you're asking there. I think that's what Kel needs to figure out, too.


Reviewer: lil jb Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 05:23PM Title: Chapter 7

great just great just freakin' great! son of a bitch! that ended so wrong! did she have to come home now?! i mean c'mon! of all days it just had to be that one! i mean what ever happened to calling the damn house to let people know you'll be arriving later than excpected?! i'm sitting here like 'damn this is getting good' then maggie gotta find them and i'm like 'aw mother fuckin bull...b.s!' ahhh why why...aw whatever just...just update soon cuz i want...no i need to know what's gonna happin' next!


Reviewer: JESSICA Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 05:02PM Title: Chapter 7

oh my god, part of me is pissed off cus she cheated....b/c i know how maggie feels. but at the same time, rofl, it was justin...so i was all happy until the part where they got caught. LMFAO. i'm such a slut. okay anyways...the sex was hot! def. got me in the mood...ROFL....now we just gotta write our little slutty story togehter, & all will be go well. oh my goodness, and on the damn table her grandpa got her...well that's fucked up but...once again, it was hot. i'm glad she wants to be with justin. i don't think she ever really ...i dunno. wanted a long thing with maggie. so anyways, lmao. it sucks to lose a best friend, btw. okay im so rambling. great...now you need to update again so i can find out what happens next. okay, kay? good and also update our site slut. lmao. i'm still upset about youknowwhat. rofl. bye!


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 04:49PM Title: Chapter 7

love it....can't believe she found out so quickly...i'm wondering how it's gonna end because i can't decide who i want together....that's a first....great job. love it!

Author's Response: Oh, that's interesting. Most people are like begging me to have Kel and Justin hook up, but you're torn. I like that. It shows that you feel for Maggie as well. It's not really a cut and dry situation to me either. Thanks for your thoughts as always.


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 04:12PM Title: Chapter 7

OH.MY.GOD.

Author's Response: Is that a good thing? lol


Reviewer: chapstickonly Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 03:57PM Title: Chapter 7

"I could remain faithful to her or that I wanted to be with someone else…” he looks at me as he trails off. “I’m that someone else?” I ask, but it’s not really a question. He doesn’t respond, but he doesn’t have to. We both know the answer." it was then that i knew it was going to be an awesome chapter. i'm so excited that they're together together, and not just dancing around it anymore. i almost couldn't stand the suspense. ~c.s. only one question, why would lesbians have condoms in their apartment? are they left over from the threesome? just wondering.

Author's Response: Well, sometimes people use condoms on sex toys, aka dildos, especially if they're sharing them. And it helps preserve them better. In that particular lesbian sex scene scene I wrote, I didn't include any sex toys, but Maggie definitely has a dildo. LOL I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, though. I knew it would make some people happy. Ha!


Reviewer: chapstickonly Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 01:17PM Title: Chapter 6

is it wrong that i'm kind of happy her parents didn't accept her because maybe that will drive her into Justin's well toned arms? great chapter. update soon. ~c.s.

Author's Response: All of you people are evil. Evil, I tell you! *snort* Heh, at least you're honest.





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