Reviews For Velvet
Reviewer: nini22 Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 11:01PM Title: Chapter 6

I feel for her right now. For some reason this chapter seemed so real, it just came to life soon as it started.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad it seemed very real to you. I always strive to make my writing seem as realistic as possible. Thank you for the compliment.


Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 09:55PM Title: Chapter 6

I LOOOOVE this story! Great update. It's sad that her parents don't accept her. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it so much.


Reviewer: endlessfever Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter 6

i love ths story so much. it is excellent., i look forward to new chapters soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And soon it is.


Reviewer: Kitty Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 02:28PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm soo happy to see u updated. This was a great chapter but pretty sad with Kels parents disowning her I'm, glad she told them about her and maggie though but i wish they came a few minutes later so that her and Justin may have hooked up. I love all the drama and tension but cant wait for Kel and Justin 2 finally be together, which will happen right? I hope so. update soon, i love this story x

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know your thoughts. I think you may be pleased with the next chapter. ;)


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 01:48PM Title: Chapter 6

Ohhhh boy... poor Kel. That had to be ten times worse with Justin sitting there as well.

Author's Response: Oh, I know! How awkward was that? I felt bad for Justin, not knowing what he should do. It wasn't really his place to say anything, but it must've been so hard not to.


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 11:52AM Title: Chapter 6

Amazing. Poor Kel, I bet that was really, really hard for her to hear.

Author's Response: Yeah, trying to put myself in her shoes...it's sad. Thanks for your response!


Reviewer: Lola Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 11:29AM Title: Chapter 6

That was an amazing chapter. I love this story. I feel sorry for Kel, I hope she is ok. That must be a very hard thing to tell your parent. I hope Kel and Justin hook up, but I guess that will be to easy. Update soon, keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I could only imagine how hard it must be to tell your parents something like that, especially when you know they won't take it well.


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 07:55AM Title: Chapter 6

god, i love this story.....kel's parents are such jerks...and their reaction, even though i expected it, still made me sad...while i do want her and justin to get together (because, i'm a sap like that with no sense of morality lol), i hope she doesn't buckle under the pressure and give up maggie just because she can't handle it....great update! more soon!

Author's Response: They ARE jerks. And it makes me sad too because people like that really exist. And hey, who ever asked you to have a sense of morality? God knows I don't. Ha! I definitely hear what you're saying, though. Thanks for the feedback, darlin'! (Kaleena, right?)


Reviewer: chapstickonly Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 05:27AM Title: Chapter 6

ever chapter is better than the last... intriguing update. i'll definitely be back to read more.

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad. I see you're kind of hungry for some updates. LOL Hope the next chapter lives up to your expectactions.


Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 12:00AM Title: Chapter 6

That sucks. Can't we all just love one another? We are who we are. The lesson for today is: Let's love unconditionally everybody. At least she came clean. Now I'm kind of torn beacause I care about Maggie's feelings now. But I'm still rooting for the Justin/Kels hook-up. Anyway, thank you for the very prompt update. More please and thank you.

Author's Response: It does suck. And we should all just love each other unconditionally. Unfortunately, the world is not so perfect. It makes me sad. I care about Maggie's feelings, too. She's really just a girl trying to love somebody. You're welcome for the prompt update. More is on its way.





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